- by Wicked Crud |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: GASP!!
- Artist: Wicked Crud
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Description:
Some of the parts a little screwy, but I just wanted to see what others thought. And personally, I think the little mistakes in a piece helps make it better.
First-time submitter, so try not to be TOO harsh, but constructive criticism is appreciated. =D - Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: gasp darkred black purple
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Comments (7 Comments)
- the_darkness_sword - 02/22/2009
- Hmm, good. But work on the face perportion, the lips look a little off. Also the right upper arm looks bent. Oh the legs also don't have enough definition, And the waist looks a little too low. Plus, add a little more shading. Other than that, good ^^
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- They are always watching - 12/20/2008
- As a fellow artist, I know how difficult hands and feet are to draw. Seriously, I hate them. If you ever see my work, you'll see that I try to avoid drawing them XD Anyways, I think you did a wonderful job on them. I like the outfit she's wearing ^_^ Her face and hair could use some work though and the whole thing could be shaded more, but otherwise, I like this piece. Great job ^_^
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- Lycan Lord Korpz - 12/19/2008
- impressive, i can see you know what your doing, try to add more shading and such though. but i for sure like this. pretty.
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- Felix Avis - 12/09/2008
- Sorry- I meant "Awesome!"
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- Felix Avis - 12/09/2008
- Awesine! I wish I could draw like that, but that's not my talent....
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- Wicked Crud - 11/30/2008
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Thank you for your comments! =) Even the ones that aren't all like "OMG, FRAKIN' AMAZING!" are helpful to me.
Especially gambitartist-'s comment. I'll remember that next time I draw a dress like that. - Report As Spam
- gambitartist - 11/29/2008
- i think one of the biggest things i'd start with, is that it'd be nice to see a larger version of the image if possible. i really love her pose, though her right (our left) arm seems a bit long. also, you might want to look at some similar dress patterns and see how the fabric lays for that kind of a dress cut. it might almost be an idea to include a hint of petticoats or something to show what's holding the dress out.
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