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  • Title: Sayuri
  • Artist: Hayai Ryuketsu
  • Description: Sayuri is an oc from one of my latest stories.
    This is the very first time i have used the screen tone tool
    and i would like some feedback

    Made in photoshop cs3
  • Date: 02/08/2009
  • Tags: sayuri manga screentone photoshop
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Lionfish The Third - 02/09/2009
  • Well that's something new. I've grown tired of seeing the ecchi most others make. The shading is VERY good. Except around the chest and the Bladed part of the hand. I like your signature. You should hone your artistic abilities a little more, most people cannot draw action in their drawings. (Such as movement and/or Hair in the wind kind of things.) I'll give you a 4/5, try a little harder and make her a little more meaty with some curve. I know you can do better, I can see it in the picture!
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