- by Moondoggy09 |
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- | Submitted on 03/20/2009 |
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- Title: Gathering Power
- Artist: Moondoggy09
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Description:
Just a little something I drew late last year from the manga I've been working on its my main character gathering materials for a Dragonballz inspired special attack.
Im not so great with color so I decided to leave it as a pencil drawing
This is my first post so please criticisim is appreciated (so long as it isnt outright abuse) - Date: 03/20/2009
- Tags: gathering power anime moondoggy manga
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Extreme Gaydar - 12/22/2009
- very nice...i definatly must say decision to leave it uncolored was good, yet the eyes and face could be more agressive, as moon bullet said...4/5!
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- MoonxBullet12 - 07/14/2009
- the face is a bit too... well.. meek.. and it doesn't look agressive enough.. i like teh effect of broken arrows and such.. I know you can sincerely do better though.. I'd suggest.. more detail on teh face... and teh left foot should be more... square.. it's too round at the bottom of the shoe.. since he's putting pressure.. it should be a line.. but all together.. well done.. 4/5
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- Austere Heart - 05/10/2009
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alot better then what i can do >.<
but i agree with magical miracle, its more of naruto's rasengan. - Report As Spam
- magical_miracle - 05/09/2009
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^___^ so awesome!!!! 10/5
Although, it slightly reminds me of Naruto's Rasengan more than DBZ. XD - Report As Spam
- MiAmorEsDios - 04/19/2009
- luv da shading!!
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- Vengeful Dreamer - 04/17/2009
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I usually stick to pencil shading as well. If I color digitally, I have to outline in pen and erase all my pencil marks, and it looks like crap on paper.
I like this one too...the arm on the left seems a little off, like the muscles are in the wrong place. The cloud of energy might look better if it were more swirly, but I can't give you any criticism that would help you in your next unrelated drawing. You're quite good. - Report As Spam
