- Title: Randomness...
- Artist: vietkieu
- Description: It was random art I made. People (Real life friends that play gaia as well) pressured me into submitting art. Please give me constructive criticisms and be honest. The background is clean because i cut out the background on photoshop. The actual drawing is grey-ish because i didn't clean that out.
- Date: 05/24/2009
- Tags: random
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ab irato - 05/27/2009
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Also the head seems a bit too large (popular stylistic preference, but try to get the basics right before settling into a style), one leg is significantly longer than the other and the torso also looks a tad long.
Aaand that was the criticism bit. I'm sorry if it's a bit overwhelming.
The shading looks nice, but don't be afraid to use several more shades of gray. Right now it still seems a bit flat. - Report As Spam
- Ab irato - 05/27/2009
- Proportions, proportions... Some guidelines to keep in mind: The knees are positioned only slightly lower than halfway the leg, elbows tend to be right above the hipbone (you got that right), hands are often slightly bigger than the face (chin to eyebrows) and feet are around the same length as the head in its entirety as seen from the front.
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- royaldarkness757 - 05/26/2009
- Color it! Color it! It's awesome!
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- megui-chan - 05/26/2009
- the proportions are a bit off =/ but it' good =)
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- CaptainSquiddles - 05/25/2009
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hands,feet, and lower part of the legs look a tad too small.
Other than that it's great! C: - Report As Spam
- II-Mai-II - 05/25/2009
- the legs look kinda 2 long but ur shading is nice ;P
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- x-pancaked - 05/25/2009
- cool..^^
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