- by Anthony Addison |
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- | Submitted on 11/09/2009 |
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- Title: Red River
- Artist: Anthony Addison
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Description:
You should see,
If you close your eyes,
All you've said,
Are lies upon lies.
A mask worn deep,
The lies make you shiver,
Soon you should be,
Crying a red river.
[ Besides that, hope you all like my attempt at making a poem, and an avatar~ ] - Date: 11/09/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ludwig_Deutschland - 11/21/2009
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Very nice Feliciano.
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- Anthony Addison - 11/21/2009
- Lol, Alfred ;3
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- Americas Alfred F Jones - 11/21/2009
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- Anthony Addison - 11/21/2009
- n w n Thank you all! <3
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- ll iSora-kun15 ll - 11/21/2009
- 5/5!! XD go italy-kun!! XD
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- Problum - 11/21/2009
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:3 rawr five//|\five :3
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- Miss Whimsi - 11/21/2009
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Very sad and powerful poem! The avi goes well with the poem too. Kinda gives me the impression of someone turning into some kind of demon/monster from the cruelty that they received... If that makes any sense. owo
*5 stars* <3 - Report As Spam
