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"Hey!"
"Wake Up!"
"Val! VAL!!"
"Huh?"
"VAL!!!!!"
"WHAT THE?!"
I opened my eyes to find my 5 year old cousin Lynns face about a half inch from mine.
"LYNN!"I yelled.
DO YOU HAVE TO KEEP ON DOING THAT?!
'Well sorry Val but you never wake up on time....its 7:12am you gotta go in an hour and 15 minutes" said she.
"Lynn thats plenty of time!We live like a block away from my school!"
"But...........but......I'm BORED....its no fun doing nothing."
"Well why did you wake up so early?"
"ummmm...I dont know....MAKE ME A SANDWITCH!"
ugh........theres no use to argue with Lynn, she always wins.Besides I got my own way to get rid of her........
"FINE!Just give me a second."I said.
"ok...1...ITS BEEN A SECOND."
"Ok what kind of sandwitch do you want?"
Ok I want cheese and ham and tomatoe, bt not one slice 1 and a half and I better not find another slice cause..."I got up and followed her to my door.
SLAM.
"VAL!"
"See ya later Lynn!"I said through the closed door.
I walked to my window and opened it.Our apartment has a great view of Central Park.I flipped my hair.
I searched the crowd 'till I found him.HIM.I caught my breath.He...he was the reason..the reason my heart always hurt.
Kreg.He had dumped me two weeks ago.I hated him...but then why did I still love him?
Love hurts.............
But I thought as I strode to my dressing table and looked at all the makeup that lay there.He is gonna love me again....lets see whos heart hurts more.....oh yes...love hurts.
- by Dependent Star |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/02/2008 |
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- Title: Love Hurts.
- Artist: Dependent Star
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Description:
I just wrote this for no reason.Please comment!
be fair 2 k?
If I get 10 comments Ill write the rest in my journal! - Date: 10/02/2008
- Tags: love hurts
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Impure Evil - 07/30/2009
- Very well written I look forward to further developments
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- ClownGirl Jester - 02/28/2009
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love it! write more now! i dont care if this is the ninth comment, just write more now!
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- Dependent Star - 12/27/2008
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ok yeah i know it doesnt make much sense so im making another one with a different plot and slightly different characters but the stories gonna be similiar k?
I dont know the name yet so just look me up
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- coolcat123615 - 12/22/2008
- the ending is good...seem like a good plot starter...but the begining didnt rly make sense
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- PrincessNicaPInk - 10/28/2008
- this is good continue wrighting it it is a little rushed though
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- Dependent Star - 10/04/2008
- Sorry it was so fast but I this is jus a small part i'll write the rest if i get more comments sorry.
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- fachong - 10/02/2008
- ya it went to fast but it was good
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