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The music screamed into her ears, letting it control her body letting it move to the beat of the drums. Her lips moving to the words the singer now sang. The other punks rocking our next to her with their Mohawks and multicolored hair. You could hear their chains rattling from miles away. The band finished another song, and started on another with the first beat of the drums. The crowds scream getting louder, as the singer screamed cuss words into the mike.
His lip rings moving side to side as he screamed the words. The girl looked up at the night sky being lit up by the flames being shot into it. I feel so alive for the first time in my life she thought calmly to herself. Something zoomed pass her making its own wind. She slowly turned to the stage knowing what she would see. The crowd started screaming, but not because of the music but of horror.
The girl's eyes saw what the rest of the crowd was seeing. The lead singer dead body being hung from the creature that had just attacked him. It looked as the creature was drinking the blood from the teenage singer. It was. The punks started rushing for the door, but the girl stayed where she stood staring at the creature on the stage, not believing her own eyes that he would be doing this. Her own brother feeding in front of humans. Her brother let the body drop and went to the rest of the paralyzed band sitting and standing in the spots they had for the whole concert.
He crouched down ready to attack his prey. He leaped, but was blocked by another of his kind. Confusion rushed over him. There stood his little sister her dyed black and red hair blowing in the wind, her chains hitting her black pants, and her leather jacket arms stretched out to her sides in front of the trembling guitarist. "Leave now, take your friends," she commanded the band, they stayed where they were still terrified "Now!"
With her yell of the order they ran without a second thought. The bass guitarist tripped and that is when her brother went in for another attack, but she was quicker. She rushed in front of the teenager and uppercut her older brother in the stomach. "Danny stop this!" she pleaded her brother "if you stop now I won't have to tell the leaders of this crime you have committed!"
"Taysh why are you so committed to the clan? I have truly learned our full power! More blood, more strength!" he muttered in reply.
She looked at Danny's blood stained mouth, she looked up to his eyes and saw his hungry in them burning to be fed. Tears trickled down her cheeks. He had left the clan, at least a week ago and hadn't returned. "I commit to the clan because they are my only family," she croaked "and you are no longer" those words torn her apart, but it was true she did not what to be related to him if he was going to do this.
The last five words hit him hard like he had been stabbed. I have cared for her since out parents died and now she decides that I am not going to have the family name! those words came into his head with a flame of anger trailing behind them. He screamed in anger, and Taysh took a few steps back. Her brother charged toward her.
He punched her in the stomach making her cough up her own blood. Another blow to her jaw. Pop! her jaw popped out of the socket it stayed in. She stumbled backwards, and wiped the blood off her mouth wincing in pain form her jaw. Music, she needed music that was her only fighting style she knew. She remembered her Ipod in her pocket and reached for it, but it was too late her brother had snatched it from her hand and smashed it in his gripped.
She felt something like a boulder hit her lung. Crack. Some of her ribs started to break, she was in to much pain to figure out how many. Danny was too fast, and strong. She was weak. She felt his eyes staring at her with anger. She reached into the inside of her jacket and produced a dagger, she had sharpened more than a thousand times. "A foolish dagger will not hurt me, Taysh, you should know that! That is a stupid move! A foolish one!" He insulted.
He pulled his hand back, and felt a cold stone run over his fingers, and becoming longer than his fingers and sharpening. His own deadly weapon.
They charged at each other as fast as their bodies could move, both weapons held up in striking position waiting for the right time to strike.
Blood fell to the ground in gallons at both of their feet. The long stone nails sticking out of Taysh's back, her dagger, now a sword, pierced through the skin of Danny's back. They look at each other stared at the other person, tears welding up in each of their eyes. Taysh leans forward and kissed her brother's forehead for the last time and her body went limp and lifeless.
Danny removed his nails from his sister's limp body and cradled her body in his arms like a mother would do to a new born child. He sat down where he stood and let his tears fall, and watched his sister's body hoping it would move again. A sharp pain shot throw his body, than another, it happened at least twenty times. That is when he remembered the sword. His breaths became gasp and the gasps became shallower with time. He pulled Taysh's body close to his and whispered as if she were still alive "I will not be going to Zyon my little sister, of the crimes I have committed I will be far from there. Tell our parents I apologize for my wrong doing"
His last tear fell and he breathed his last breath, and as Taysh's body had his went lifeless and clasped onto the stage floor.
- by Goldenthyrsus |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: A Good Day Gone Bad
- Artist: Goldenthyrsus
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another one of my vampire englisg warm-ups >< i need to stop with these>< tell what you think of the STORY not if i need to edit it or spell check, i just want to know what you think of the STORY...
Please leave a comment (>^^)> - Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: vampire blood death brother sister
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Zhelanie - 03/19/2009
- i like it ! it's really great!
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- RavenMasen15 - 03/19/2009
- this is GREAT.
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- Caliimia - 07/17/2008
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Thanks for the comment. biggrin
I love me some vampires wink
Keep writing, I love your work. - Report As Spam