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one day a guy is walking from his house when all of a sudden the sky turns pitch black a hole forms in the middle
of the ground and a hand comes out and says your soul is mine i give you my powers it points at his arm and all of a
sudden there is a strange marking there he told him his first target he went there and it was a bus of innocent
children
he just stood there not doing anything so he heard a voice say if you wont do your job i will send someone to do it
for you then he saw a demon come out of the floor and disappear he looked on the bus and nobody was there he saw a
bright light and it said you know what will happen so you can fix it " what will happen"? he went home and went to
bed
he woke up and he found himself at the bus again he knew what he had to do so he waited for the demon and when it
came up he grabbed it and started fighting it all of a sudden it vanished and he heard the voice say you are strong
i will give you one more chance here is your next target it was a small church he refused to do anything then it had
turned black he saw a weird figure.
it said you are useless i take my powers back then right before it could he flew up in the air and said these are my
powers and i shall use them as i please he escaped demons were sent after him for years he was fighting them and
saving people then a demon had pushed a car into another but he could only save one person he looked at the other
one and it was his brother he screamed you can have your powers if you can revive my brother every thing turned dark
and all of a sudden the marking went away then he heard a voice say you fool if i have what i want why should i help
you then everything turned back to normal and he saw the bright light again and it said with all the lives you have
saved i will give you your brother back after that he was in the hospital standing in front of his brother and he
said i saw th hole thing when you were fighting that demon i saw the bright light behind you the hole time
thats when he realized he wasn't using his power but instead the lord was helping him the hole time
- by flamingpie32 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: a gift not really given
- Artist: flamingpie32
- Description: someone told me i should start writing stories so this is what i came up with
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: devil powers demons
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Comments (6 Comments)
- LolliFrogg - 04/09/2009
- great story! the only problem i had was with the dialogue in the story bcuz i couldnt distinguish t from the rest of the story but really original story i like it
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- fluffernutter94 - 09/08/2008
- intresting! good! original! never read anything like it! well written! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- SylviaTheRanger - 08/19/2008
- nicely done. But puctuation is important so you dont have runon sentences. Also please read mine [tags: ranger Sylvia]
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- animalsaverkid8 - 08/19/2008
- It is a good story for beginners but try to use better grammar and punctuation marks cause if you don’t people will get confused by the middle.
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- holy_angel_of_doom - 08/19/2008
- nice, awesome story read mine to all three of them if you have time [tags: dream, twins, star] thxx
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