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Chapter 1: The Betrayal
It is a cold winters day, birds are migrating south for the winter, and squirrels are hiding in their trees eating their nuts. Snakes and other woodland creatures were also hiding for their winter hibernation. And as all that was going on two teenagers were walking home from a hard day at school. “Why did we have to go outside for gym in this weather” The oldest of the two said, he has short blonde-hair, violet eyes, and white skin complete with a suntan which he got in the summer. James had on a Kamakura high school uniform made for boys. The attire was simple a white shirt with a black vest over it, black pants, black shoes, and a brown leather belt
“Because Mr. Holt told us that it would help our bodies- the younger of the two started saying but was interrupted by her best friend. She had long black hair that goes down to her mid-back, light red eyes, and pale white skin, but what really stood Christina out the most was two horns growing out of her head. She also had on the same uniform as James although it was made for girls. Instead of pants the girls wore black mini skirts. “To help our bodies get used to the cold. Really Christina you should start disobeying orders for once.”
“And be like you James, uh-uh” she said shaking her head. James heard that loud and clear.
“Chris did I hear what I thought I heard.”
“Don’t know what you’re talking about”
“Yes you do now come back here,” he yelled as she ran off
“Christina, wait up.”
“No chance.” She yelled back at James, who was catching up to her unfortunately for her. He caught up to her and tapped her on the shoulder. Chris looked back up at James. “James?” Chris asked puzzled by why he tapped her shoulder in the first place ‘probably just messing with me’ Suddenly there was an earthquake, the ground opened right beneath her, she lost her footing and began falling, falling to her death. ‘This is it I’m going to die’ Christina thought as she was falling but suddenly her vectors came out of her back and grabbed onto the edges of the ground the where the ground split open. She then pulled herself back up. ‘Phew, that was a close one, right James.” She said smiling at the place James was supposed to be. When She realized James wasn’t there she began calling out to him “JAMES, JAMES! WHERE ARE YOU, JAMES?” ‘Oh no he couldn’t have’ she looked down at the open ground that the earthquake made. It was like looking right into the mouth of hell, and hell itself wanted to swallow her up.
(With James)
“Hey, earthquake plan worked great!” James spoke into his walkie-talkie. The house he’s currently in was not looking too good. A guy with dark raven-black hair, tanned skin, and cobalt blue eyes. His name was Kouta. He had on a black collared shirt, his pants were dark blue, and his cobalt blue eyes were open wide in horror and shock. Blood was everywhere around his body, his head cut off and lay on the floor beside Lucy. Lucy had on a white nightgown and covered in blood, also Lucy has cherry red hair and crimson eyes, her skin was white a simple cream color, but tonight her skin looked as white as a ghosts and her crimson eyes were opened with shock and horror. She just saw her lover’s head get chopped off. Lucy could not say a word as she watched the sadistic human talk on his walkie-talkie.
“Great, I’ll Tell Kakuzawa” A very enthusiastic man named Tokima said. Over his walkie-talkie, which was all the way over on the Diclonius Research Island Facility.
“Not yet I have some unfinished business I need to take care of” The sadistic human known as James said.
“But sir, the earthquake could have-, but Tokima was cut off by James throwing the receiver down on the ground
“I DON’T WANT TO TELL THAT a*****e ANYTHING” James yelled out loud. Meanwhile Lucy was slowly crawling over to Kouta. James noticed that and took out one of his knifes and threw it at her stomach.
“AAAAAAAH” Lucy screamed out in agony, one of her hands moved to stomach trying to ease the blood flow. Lucy then tried to summon her vectors, but every time she tried a searing pain would shoot through her.
“Hey, did you forget retard, Diclonius can’t use their vectors while in pain.” James then kicked her head and left the living room and began heading upstairs to a young diclonius’s room. That diclonius was Christina’s younger sister, Eimelle.
“K-Kouta” Lucy said weakly before succumbing to unconsciousness.
(With Christina)
The sky suddenly turned a reddish color, as if to signal the time of death has come for the family at the Maple Inn. Christina stood up from where she sat; she was puzzled as to why an earthquake would suddenly occur in a place where earthquakes hardly happen. ‘Earthquakes don’t happen in Kamakura. What’s going on here?’ She suddenly had a sharp pain in her head. ‘Is someone screaming’ She recognized that scream ‘Sounds like it’s coming from my house’ She thought and began running to the Maple Inn.
When she got there she quickly opened the door and flipped on the light. What she saw was horrifying. Her Dad lay in cold blood head cut off, Her Mom lying on the floor blood surrounding her as well. “MOM, DAD!!!”” She yelled out and ran towards Lucy’s side, because she knew Kouta was already dead. “Hey, Mom wake up, wake up?” Chris said tears threatening to spill down her face, but she quickly wiped them away.
“C-Christina” Lucy said weakly coughing up blood due to the injury she received in her stomach. Chris noticed this and looked at her mom.
“Mother?”
“C-Christina I w-want you to have this” Lucy said a grabbed a sword with an imprint of Diclonius Vectors on it. “It’s called Arkarina, It’s been meant for you all along. It only responds to the Queens, you and me. Since I’m going to die anyways. I’ll give it to you. Now go save your sister.” Lucy then convulsed, stopped, and died. The blood was now all over Christina now.
“MOM, NO DON’T DIE ON ME, MOM!” Chris yelled out letting the tears fall. “Mom” ‘You gave me this sword and I’m going to use it.’ Chris thought while grabbing Arkarina and standing up. “Eimelle, I’ll save you”
Ch.1: Eimelle’s Dies
The young pink haired girl called Eimelle was hiding under the blankets, She had her pajamas on they were pink with blue penguins on them, she had skin as tan as her dad’s and her hands were covering her ears trying to block out the sounds of the screaming coming from downstairs. The room she is in is pink. Plush toys, surrounds her keeping her company, as well as comfort. Eimelle picks up her favorite Plushy she called Teddy. It is a brown teddy bear with a purple scarf around its neck. “Teddy, I-I is scared. Mommy and Daddy are down there. Hope there okay.” Eimelle didn’t know it but there was a man with blonde hair and violet eyes staring down at her trembling form.
“You know. Your Mommy and Daddy won’t help you now” James says smirking. Eimelle uncovers her head from the blankets. She then looks up at the murderer with light blue questioning eyes. Her eyes suddenly brighten and a huge smile made it’s way to her face.
“JAMES!” Eimelle yelled hopping off of the bed and into his arms. But before she could do just that he pulled a gun from the inside of his pants pocket. “Huh” Eimelle stared at the deadly weapon. “J-James. Why?” She questioned tears in her eyes.
“Your parents are dead.” The gun is still pointed at her.
“Dead? No they can’t be! Mama and Papa cannot die! They can’t die.” The tears are freely running down her cheeks. ‘Mom. Dad. Dead’ those are the only thoughts running through her mind right now. James saw the fear showing in her eyes, the gun drawing nearer. “Please no I don’t want to die.”
“Well too bad” A door opened showing a bloodied Christina.
“Let her go. James” Chris said worried for her sister’s life.
“What if I say no. Hm, Chris.” He was looking at her now.
‘Good he’s looking at me’
“SISTER!” Eimelle yells, running towards her older sister. Eimelle tripped on one of her toys, trying to reach her sister. ‘
“EIMELLE!!!” Christina shouted at her fallen sister. She reached her hand out towards her little sister. Eimelle raised her head up and started standing up reaching out for her sister also. A gunshot was heard all throughout the neighborhood as the bullet pierced through Eimelle’s chest. Christina looked down and saw the puddle of blood forming around her sister. “NOOOO!!!! EIMELLE!!!!!” Chris walked over towards her sister. She knelt down checking for a pulse. There was none. Her eyes opened wide. ‘No not her too.’ Christina rose up reached her hand out grabbing her new sword, Arkarina. ‘Everybody I love. Dies. Why?’ She remembered her best friend dying at the hands of a gang in school. They called themselves the ‘Bloods’.
“NO, Toshima!!!”
“You bastards.”
‘I couldn’t control them. My hands’ She lifted her sword up as if too strike. ‘I promised too never let another precious person get killed. I couldn’t keep it’ She was running now, tears streaming down her face. Arkarina was going to slash him in two, but he had a dagger. He threw it at her and she came crashing down onto the floor.
“Ha!!! Love it. Absolutely love it. The look on a Diclonius’s face as they die” He said laughing. He walked closer towards her. She got up and pulled the dagger out, wincing in pain as she did so. She was looking at him right in the eye, light red meeting violet. “Your scared aren’t you”
“I’m not scared.” She lied looking up at him with fear in her eyes. “I- I thought you was disturbed when I first met you. Now I know the truth. YOU ARE!!!”
“Shut Up” He yelled punching her hard in the face. “You don’t know what it’s like being truly tortured. Being an outcast, and being controlled.” Chris saw pain in his violet eyes. Pain she never saw before “But that doesn’t matter now. All that matters is that I wipe every Diclonius off the face of the earth. Starting with you.” He slashed at her with a dagger cutting off her arm.
“AAAAAAARGH” She screamed out in pain. She knew her arm had been cut off, but she didn’t want to look. “No I don’t want this. Please James Stop it. STOP IT NOW!!!” She was crying freely now the tears running down her face like rivers. He just kept cutting. “(Sniff) pl-p-please. Stop it” She lost all consciousness. When he was done, he stood up and stared at his handiwork. The blood was all around her now. Even on him. James left the room picking up Arkarina and placing it next too the now limbless Christina. He then walked out of the room and out of the house.
Suddenly there was a white light. The light surrounded the teenage Diclonius, embracing her with its warmth. “I won’t take her just yet,” The light said. “She still has much more in her life to fulfill. But for now I’ll send her to another world, a world only where Alchemy reigns supreme.” The being of light known as the angel of death chanted some kind of ancient language, and Christina disappeared from sight into the Full Metal Alchemist’s World.
Chapter 3: Auto mail
The Sun was shining outside of Resembool, it was a quiet little town, nothing much to do there besides watching the Sunset. People were bustling about buying items, such as food and stuff for their homes.
Two teenage boys were walking down the streets of Resembool. Their names are Edward and Alphonse Elric. “I can’t wait to get back to Central, can you Al?” Ed stated. Ed has long blonde hair held up in a braid, black pants, black shoes, black t-shirt, and a red coat to go over the shirt.
“Yeah, I guess so brother.” Al said no really paying attention to what Ed was saying. Al had a suit of armor as a body with only a soul. You see the Ed and Al tried to bring their Mom back to life by the use of human transmutation. In exchange for bringing their Mom back was their blood. But what they didn’t know was that they’d have to give a whole lot more then a drop of blood. Al’s body was taken; Ed’s left leg was taken. In exchange for getting Al’s soul back Ed had to give up his right arm. Now here they are searching for the Philosophers Stone, a magic amplifier that can boost ones alchemic power.
(With Christina)
“Ugh. Where am I?” the now limbless Christina mumbled. Christina tried to get up, but realized she couldn’t. She looked down at her body and a searing pain comes ripping right through her. “AAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!” She screamed she was in so much pain, that she even lost all consciousness.
(With Ed&Al)
Ed was busy rambling on about how he was going to kick Mustangs pompous a** when he came back to Central. “I’m going to make him sorry” Ed wasn’t looking where he was going during his rambling, and bumped into Al. “Al? What’s wrong? Why’d you stop?” Ed asked his younger brother. Al stood completely still not talking to Ed.
“E-Ed. L-look over t-there” Al said shakily pointing at a body. The body seemed to be limbless. Al then ran over to the body.
“AL, wait up” Ed called out to his brother. When Ed got to where Al was he saw what Al was looking at. A body. It was a girl; she had long black hair, a black school uniform on and horns. But what shocked him the most weren’t the horns it was the fact that she was limbless. “Al? Could she have?”
“I don’t know brother, I don’t know.”
“We’ve got to get her to Aunt Pinako’s quick. Before she dies.” Ed picked Christina up and ran all the way too Pinako’s home.
(With Pinako&Winry Rockbelle)
An old lady with gray hair pulled back into a bun/ponytail (A/N: I’m not sure) was pacing round the front door waiting for Ed and Al to bring home the groceries from the local stand. “What is taking those boys too long” She said, she was patient at times like these, but when it took the boys seven hours too bring home the food she started too wonder how long until her patience will run out. Just then a blonde haired, blue-eyed girl came walking towards Pinako.
“Relax Grandma, I’m sure Ed&Al are just fine”
“I hope your right Winry, I hope your right.”
(With Ed&Al)
“What are we going to do brother?” Alphonse asked his elder brother. He could tell that Ed was worried about this girl, they found lying in the snow. They didn’t know anything about her, where she came from, who she is. More importantly what she is. “She’s not human, Could she be a homunculi?”
“Nonsense Al, how could she be. There’s not a mark of a homunculi on her anywhere.” Ed replied still carrying the severely injured Christina in his arms. “Hey I see Aunt Pinako’s house. Come on!” Ed quickly rushed in the door not bothering to knock.
Pinako saw Ed holding a girl in his arms. “What in the world?” Pinako began to ask confused. Ed placed Christina on the auto mail operating table. Pinako hurried in front of him, and Asked, “Edward Elric what are you doing”
Ed saw the stern look in Pinako’s face and thought ‘I can’t explain to her what happened because I don’t even know myself’ “I can’t explain right now.”
“Why not?”
“Just Can’t”
“Was it the forbidden art of Alchemy”
“I don’t know, but what I do know is that this girl is in a lot of pain and her arms and legs are missing. Looks like a knife” Just then Winry came running in the room.
“What happened to her?” She asked as she just stared at the girl. But what she was really staring at was not the girl but the horns. She looked away as if repulsed by the site. “Well we better start making her better then shall we”
“Yes.” Ed, Al, and Pinako said. And together they worked to build Christina some auto mail that matched her skin tone.
(To be continued) Tell me should I continue.
Story can also be found here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4290220/1/Christina_The_Diclonius_of_Revenge
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- Title: Elfen Lied
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Christina: The Diclonius of Revenge.
Summary: Chris had been made fun of when she was little and was about to commit suicide, but as fate would have it James stopped her and offered to be her friend. One day when she got home from school she found her parents dead Seen her sister’s death and lost her limbs in the process of trying to save her Ever Since then, she’s been walking on the path of revenge Seeking a way to kill the person who killed her family.
- Date: 09/10/2008
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