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A girl named Jullia loves a guy name Jose Marufo. They're both in Middle School, Jullia is always embarassed to ask him out, but Jose never noticed Jullia being shy. One day, Jullia was walking by her cousin Chung while Chung was walking by Jose. Chung and Jose talked and Jullia unzipped Chung's backpack and Jose had reflex and quickly looked at his but nothing happenedto his. A guy was following Jullia. He looked old maybe around 32, he turned while Jullia kept looking at him. The next thing you know, Chung shouted "Raza, Jullia likes you", and Jullia got embarassed and starting hittin Chung and yelled at him, then the mysterious man came to Jullia, grabbed her arm and died. It was The Reaper! Jose M. gently carried on his lap and making sure Jullia was ok, but she wasn't. Chung inspired Jose M. to kiss Jullia so she can be reborn, but then he got embarassed. The Reaper laughed and said "It can only be revived by her true love", which was Jose M. and Jose kissed her lips-lips and Jullia revived and The Reaper was gone by then.
TO BE CONTINUED!
- by XxGods AssasinXx |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/16/2008 |
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- Title: Death and Love
- Artist: XxGods AssasinXx
- Description: A girl in Middle School is in love but someone is chasing her.
- Date: 10/16/2008
- Tags: death love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Hentaimom - 02/05/2011
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Middle school children do not fall in love.
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- Damned Idiot - 07/26/2010
- very bad , could of been explained better
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- Epileptic Juicebox - 11/14/2009
- it doesnt sund like a story, it sounds like an outline. it is terribly written. good story line tho...
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- AureliaTurner22 - 07/21/2009
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Terrible... 1/5 for sympathy
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 05/21/2009
- You could make it a little more descriptive, but it's good. To me it was kinda confuzing, why did she unzip his backpack? But whatever. 4/5 wink
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- xtinkkx - 10/26/2008
- oh i didnt know it was abouta real person (abviuosly a fiction story tho)well its good story
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- Jullialove - 10/17/2008
- ugh stop writing story about me and ppl who read this some part is true okay.but plz dont let jose m. see this okay.and i am gonna kill cung the story maker.
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