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I could here it, the soft beat of my heart finally coming to an end. Blackness slowly covering my sight. People say you could see your life flash before your eyes, or see a light coming in your direction but i saw nothing but darkness. When my heart stopped i grinned. Knowing heaven or hell would reject me.
I awoke hovering over my lifeless body. not knowing what i looked like or not able to speak. time will pass by slowly for me now. I tried to leave this darken room but a pain so hell fully strong pulled at me and i knew, i knew i could never leave. I heard foot steps come along the stone tile. A door slammed open."She's gone. Get him in here NOW." A mans voice screamed. I couldn't see the mans face or anything else. More foot steps came."How could you let her die? I specifically told you I wanted her alive." Another mans, a younger mans voice hissed."You can still bring her back. Use your talent." the other man said. I hovered over towards the young man. Everything then went bright. A soft baby blue light covered the young man. His hair a golden color, his skin a flawless pale color, eyes the color of fresh spring grass color. He was perfectly handsome. The young man leaned down and brushed his lips over my dead lips. I put my hand on his cheek and he froze. I never knew he'd be able to feel me till he put his hand over mine. He grabbed my hand and put it to my cold dead chest. Then i awoke back in my body gasping for air."She lives." how could it be? I know I have been dead for at least a couple weeks, just hovering over my dead body."You belong to me, and because of that you've stolen my heart. Your just lucky I'm here and Mihale found you." the young man said. That's when my life restarted as his heart.
- Title: Vowed To Honar
- Artist: kesub
- Description: a short part of my story that i have written and am still writing. Hope you like.
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: vowed honar
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Comments (5 Comments)
- DebbieBonBon - 03/10/2010
- I can't wait for the whole story!
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- mysticrydder - 03/08/2009
- well that was rude. she didn't get a choice of whether or not she wanted to live on. good story and like wootification said, a couple grammar errors.
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- Razerkiss - 10/19/2008
- Very Very breath taking
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- W00tification - 10/19/2008
- Couple of grammer errors but otherwise very good.
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- sasori_sensai 21 - 10/19/2008
- wow real nice use of words and very nice story its your own experience writing very good
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