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It was dark and outside it was cold. Not strange, it was midnight.
I was in my bed, and I tried to sleep. But everytime when I closed my eyes I heard something, and then I opened them again.
I don't know what happend next, The only thing I know is that I heard the front door which was opening. That wasn't possible, I thought, I closed it. It used to be locked. You can't open it..
Carefully I stooded up and I went downstairs... I don't know how, I don't know what happend. The front door was wide open...
I whispered 'This isn't possible'. I closed it again and checked the rest of the house. There was nothing in it.
I went upstairs again. I tried to forget what just happend. I was thinking about other, cheerfull things, like flowers and stuff.
Just when I closed my eyes again I heard the door again.
This wasn't possible. I went downstairs. I locked the door again and I checked the rest of the house. Nothing, again.
I was tired. I went upstairs again. My clock said it was 11:58 pm.
I closed my eyes. 23:59....
The minute was gone so fast...
And then I heared it again. I opened my eyes. This couldn't be the truth. I went downstairs but now, there was somebody standing there.
I couldn't see his face. I couldn't see him at all. He ran away, My house in. I ran after him. He ran to the bathroom and closed the door. He didn't lock it, he closed it. I opened and put on the light. I screamed.
The person was gone but on the wall was a message.
Look into the mirror, there's something you will see. Blood will be there everywhere. Then you get to the bath and let the water come in. If you don't do that, something will happen to your family.
I know I shaked. I walked to the mirror and saw myself in my bathroom with lots of blood. I saw somebody in the bath, a dead person. I turned around. It was real...
On the floor was blood. The person in the bath was a girl. I walked to her. I let the water come in. The girl opened her eyes and screamed. Then I saw something I didn't want to see. That girl... That was me...
I was scared as hell. What was happening here? I looked to the wall. The message has changed.
Now take up the knife and put it in her heart...
Knife? I was looking around. Then I saw the little knife by the bath.
I picked it up and looked to the me in the bath. She couldn't scream anymore, it was to cold.
I closed my eyes and did what the message said. Then I looked at the wall again. New message.
Everyone will think this was suicide.
The first time you closed the door I took your body to the bathroom. You couldn't see it because you didn't want to.
The second time you closed the door I took your blood. You didn't see it because you didn't want to.
The third time I took your soul. You saw it.
Next time, check everyting girl...
- by lOveSugarbaby_x |
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- | Submitted on 11/05/2008 |
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- Title: Close the door.
- Artist: lOveSugarbaby_x
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Description:
Don't look @ my grammar. I'm not an English person or something.. xD
- Date: 11/05/2008
- Tags: close door
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Comments (4 Comments)
- VioletNitemare - 08/26/2009
- This was FrEaKy!!! But I really liked it!!! 5/5 & fave!! Great job ^-^
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- Xx-NuMbCoMplication-xX - 07/12/2009
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WOW!1!!!!
in a good way. ^^ - Report As Spam
- Novama - 05/05/2009
- You are right not to look at grammar, but looking at it I wonder if there are also mechanics issues.
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- vanessa_jacob - 11/14/2008
- That was very detailed good JOB!!
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