- Where am I? I-I don't remem- thats when my surroundings caught my attention I noticed this room it was the room they told me about, the room where they the the ones who-who NO!! Its not possible i'm not dead...or am I, I went to jareds party and i passed out thats what happened I passed out this is just a nightmare i'll wake up in a few minutes and i'll be fine...why am i not wakeing up. I stood up off the cold slab of metal i was on, but when I got up i turned around and saw me pale lifeless body I noticed that I had a slit in my throat and that they all ready did an autopsy I walked away from my lifeless body shocked at how vivid my dream was and went out of the room into the cold halls of the acursed place of death, I saw a person walking out of one of the rooms so I walked up to her and said hello but she ignored me so I tryed again but no responce i tried to grab her but when i did i went straight through, I ran back to the roomand try to pick the sterile objects up but i couldn't i ran to my body and tryed to shake me awake, nothing i couldnt touch anything not even myself i slid down to the ground and started to cry for it was then that i finaly realized this was no dream no nightmare...I was dead.
- by ~Twist_Goddess~ |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: The Death of Me...
- Artist: ~Twist_Goddess~
- Description: I was bored so I wrote it if it's bad tell me criteice it till the thing is perfect lol and thanks for reading it.
- Date: 11/08/2008
- Tags: death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The Flies Are Dancing - 11/26/2008
- It was pretty good, but I agree, a little longer wuld be nice. Tap into her past maybe, have a flashback from the party, or let her watch her own funeral.
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- mmm174 - 11/15/2008
- Its ok, but you might want to make it longer.
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