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Maple Sunrise was dancing at the prom date. It was a Saturday night and the sky was the color of Navy Blue. As Maple began dancing I got with my prom date. And Maple said '' It's so delightful to see you here'' As there was blushes on my face. My beautiful dress was pink as flowers, and my tiara had hearts and it was silver, my high heels were light pink. Maple looked beautiful. My date was Trevor. We grabbed hands and started dancing. We started dancing. I got a new partner his name was Joe. He was the hottest guy on earth. Then we got a cookie and some soda from the table. We ate or cookie together It was yummy. We drank our soda. Joe said '' You look so beautiful'' and I said '' You look handsome'' And we started dancing. Joe finally asked '' Wanna marry me when we turn 31?'' I said ''Okay'' And I was happy.
The song Love Story that was played by Taylor swift started playing. So i showed Joe how talented I sing. I sang Love story. Joe thought about my singing. He had part of the song. So we sang it together. I was his love one. And he was to. We sang: Fall for you, Gotta find you , Somebody to love, Almost lover, Bubbly, Don't go Breakin' my heart, Hero, This is me, I miss you, If cupid had a heart, When you look me in the eyes. Then the prom date was over. Maple and Trevor went outside to the fountain and talked a little then it was time to leave.But before we left we kissed goodbye.
The End.
- by Dr Eliot_SC |
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- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: The Prom Date
- Artist: Dr Eliot_SC
- Description: Please comment and rate Thank you
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: prom date
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LolliFrogg - 04/09/2009
- its lame, cheesy, and really "wanna arry me when we turn 31?" thats really really stupid.
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- Lost-in-Dreamland-again - 01/07/2009
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Lol it was okay. It didn't really get my attention at the beginning but I thought the "Do you want to marry me when I turn 31?" was pretty funny. LOL
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- Xx Kiki xxX - 12/27/2008
- good story line b needs more detail a bit boring... NEEDS DETAIL...and it will be a good story.
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- kaieunown13 - 12/01/2008
- umm its good but some of it makes no sense
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- sweethotty13 - 11/30/2008
- THIS WAS A rEALLY GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Inflamation - 11/30/2008
- awwwwwwwwww but the thing is that it sounds 2 perfect.
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- CristaXxLoveYouXx - 11/30/2008
- hey sista u did good!!
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