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When i awoke i didn't know where i was. Eveything looked new but unfimiliar. I was laying in a bed in a room that i am only able to descrlbe with 1 word...blue. The room had navy blue paint all over it and i was in a canopy bed with blue velvet that almost looked black. About 5 feet away there was a window. I shot right up and looked around there were 2 doors. One was wide open and it lead to what looked like a bathroom. The other was closed. For about a second i was freaking out. So many thoughts went through my mind. but I remebered that me and my Mom got to the house. it was a lot bigger then i thought. i went straight to a room witch Mom had said was mine and was asleep the second i hit the pillow. i got up and changed my clothes into a green T-shirt and a pair of plain jeans. I went downstairs to say hello to my Mom but I saw she was asleep on the couch. all of the boxes were inside. So all I did was take a blanket to put on my Mom, get an apple, and went to school.
The school was about half a block away, but there was SO much to see. You could see the ocean from my house and I pasted house after house and they were all different but they had 1 thing in common, they all looked old and expensive.
I got to the high school, safely, and wandered untill I found the Student office. I walked in but the lady behind the counter looked confused. I took a few steps and finally spoke. "Um...hi. I'm Kira Davis." The lady sighed and said "Oh our the new girl. Well here's your class schedule and i'll see you tomarrow."
- by HikariXLockheart |
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- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: Love Story Chapter 2: Carmel
- Artist: HikariXLockheart
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Description:
Bookworm Kira loves reading books about True love. But when her parents split up, She has to move between her parents in California. Her life goes well untill she meets Brandon & Jake.
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: love story chapter carmel
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- Disguised_Spirit - 12/11/2008
- Very bad
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- Miolan - 12/01/2008
- Try spelling out numbers like "one" instead of 1... um... rule of thumb, anything under one hundred, should be spelled out, even then it's more prefessional if it is spelled out. And, please remember to use commas properly with quotes. Also, capitolize your I's. It's not that hard to hit the shift key. If you're "just
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