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The Lonely And Disturbed Girl pt.1
There she was, a young and beautiful girl. She was at her bedside window listening to the beautiful sounds drifting through the darkness of the night. she heard him playing a cello, not like any ordinary cello but one that held a soft yet sweet melody. Then feeling an urge to wander the streets at night she then got up and left her window down the stairs and through the back door into the sweet smelling darkness. As she walked the streets of the city of angels she had many gazes on her those of both mortals and immortal demons. She had beautiful brown hair and eyes that were a amazing deep ocean blue her skin was fair and the scent that followed her was that of sweet pea and strawberries,though many gazed upon her grace and beauty none dared approach her..until tonight. She wore a nice warm top with long sleeves to keep her arms warm and a skirt that went up to her knees her stockings were striped she wore shoes that covered her ankles that were fragile. She held what seemed to be a rag doll at first glance but actually appeared to be a stuffed bunny doll. As she wandered the streets she knew all to well, she did not notice what was lurking further down and in the alley. As she made her way she suddenly had the feeling her every move was being studied and watched carefully. As the shadows of the night danced around her she started to panic, so her pace quickened and her eyes moved all around her surroundings then like a stab to the heart..she saw him...to be continued..
- by Mentir Sourire |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: The Lonely And Disturbed Girl
- Artist: Mentir Sourire
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Description:
it's just a short little story i wrote i hope you all like it. ^-^
i have two other parts for it and ill post them up later. - Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: lonely disturbed girl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Light Flip4evr - 12/06/2008
- Omg I love it. biggrin
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- ll Ozaku ll - 12/04/2008
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Kaya should be a writer ;D
Great Job Kaya i could not have done any better - Report As Spam
- iA n n a in Wonderland - 12/03/2008
- It's pretty, but has a few grammatical errors. Love it, though.
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- Greedy Fat Cat - 12/03/2008
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pretty...5/5
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