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I run down the hallway breathing heavily and my heart punding against my rib cage. It was so dark in here. I could hear a crash and people screaming my name. Death was coming to get me. I have to get out of here. It was coming to get me and I had to get out...I had to get out!!!
Clear!
1...2...3...
Clear!
I felt the serge of shock electrify my chest.
1...2...3...
Clear!!
I gasped as air returned into my lungs. I looked around, well attepted to i guess, i was so dizzying. "Linda! Oh my God!" Harvey came rushing up to me. "Are you okay? Are you hurt? Can you feel your fingers? How many fingers am I holding up?"
Poor Harvey, he's so panicky. Harvey is one of my very close friends. We just started going out with each other. "If you give my space maybe I can ponder that thought." I rasped, suprised of my own voice. "Sorry Lin." he said sheepishly.
What happen? For what my brain signals are trying to tell me, I was in the hospital. I...I think I was in a car accident. I remember my mom was in the drivers seat and it was raining hard. Pouring down with big drops of rain and pea-sized hail. And then I remember seeing smoke and hellish fire.
"Mom!" I sat up abrutedly and looked. "Linda, your mom is in critical condition." he takes my hand and places it in his. "The drunk driver hit her pretty hard, the doctors are doing everything they can to help her."
"So what going to happen? Is she going to make it?" i asked concerned. He takes the back of my hand and kissed it. "I don't know love, i don't know." We then sat in silence. After a while the doctors came in and ran some test. My older brother was coming here because he got off early.
I stare out the window still recalling the last events. It was still raining . Still the same pittering and pattering against the hospital window pane.
Whats going to happen to me? What if my mom dies? So many answer were swirming around in my head and i didn't have answer to any of them. I just praying to whatever is out there to please make everything okay.... Please....just make everything okay.
- by xProsperityx |
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- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Secret Life
- Artist: xProsperityx
- Description: A quick segment of my online book I'm started. It's about...oh well i have to wait to the next segment to tell you. I hope you like it so far. Enjoy!
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: secret life teenager
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 7H3 R34P3R - 02/23/2009
- wats the point its just a car crash? i dont even know if Linda is a cool person or who she is. its not rly an idea if its just a car crash
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- PrincessNicaPInk - 01/02/2009
- it is good i really hope you continue 4/5
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- Dissolve the Pain - 12/10/2008
- it was pretty good, could use more detail and u need to work on ur grammar stuff....i can see what ur getting at though, good job, but i can only give u a 3/5..sorry, keep working though, im sure it will get better because its a really good idea smile
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- Zombie Warfare - 12/10/2008
- GHOOOOOOOOST!!!!
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