- As our car drove away all I could do was look out the back window and wave goodbye to all I was leaving behind. Nothing will be the same as I started to turn around. When I heard something I swung around in my seat only to see a girl fading in the distance. It was the one I loved so. I put my hand on the glass as if to stroke her beautiful hair one last time. I had no idea at the time but tears were running down my face. Than instinctively I put my other hand on the cold, cold glass as if I wanted to go back, but it was too late for that love story, but, as if a marical had happened the car turned around. I turned and gave dad a puzzled look "We forgot something." My father exclaimed to the family. My eyes started to swell with tears. Even if it was only a second it was a second more with the one I loved.
- by sharinganlemur |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: broken love
- Artist: sharinganlemur
- Description: a tragic story writen for a school project
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: broken love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Neko_Bukuro - 03/10/2010
- I really don't care what anyone said...(and if this was written forever ago) it's beautiful...
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- littlebunnygirl99 - 02/07/2009
- I don't like this story at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Julia Dream - 12/10/2008
- Run this through spell check, fix the grammar, and learn that "I" is always capitalized.
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