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detective robinson was reading the late night paper and talking to his friend and partner in life nancy when all of a sudden
the phone rang. "hello , yes this is he, really??? ill be right there"dective robinson said . "who was that???" nancy asked . "officer binkley he said that
there has been a murder on 49 th street. docter roy .g biv has been murdered.
i must run dear im very sorry." dective robinson said. "set up the best coach
we have for your father john" nancy said ."yes mother ." said john "no need i will take the car." dective robinson said .
later on the famous dective was at roy . g biv's house and he studied the case
roy .g biv was aperintly reading this paper , officer binkly declaired when a killer killed him . "well , he highlighted some words in this paper. "the famous detective replied . "the words are pot.o gold. i need his files and records . i will need to know all the details about this man ,where he lives ect."
i will need to investigate this case further once i find this man.
24 hours later..........
did you find his files????? "yes sir i did."said the officer.
he lives 2 houses away .
what happened at the end :
the suspect turned out to be a leporcon called pot of gold and he killed roy .g.biv. he was charged with murder and sent into prison for 3 years .
that my friends is the end of this story.
- by duckyfan1996 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: dective robinson stories
- Artist: duckyfan1996
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Description:
in this adventure detective robinson finds the person who murdered
doctor roy .g biv( a famous scientist) full of mystery and action!!! - Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: robinson
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Suleene - 09/11/2013
- I really liked it smile can't wait to read more stuff.
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- i_Sexii_bi0tch_ - 03/26/2009
- hehe funny
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- Dark RR - 03/15/2009
- This needs to be cleaned up in the syntax department. You also have no motive for the leprechaun...
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- Really Rad - 12/13/2008
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Okay it was nice
But u should check ur paragraphs and caps AND punctuation
It would be easier to read!
Otherwise 4/5 - Report As Spam