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story title: Rosen Lunar
Chapter one: fainted breath
Outside, deep beneath the dark cloudy sky, I, Bella Swan, am standing there in the sand, looking at the wavy ocean. With the wind blowing in my hair, with the coolest breeze, I felt like being able to merge, and flow with the wind. I walked around in the many pieces of the tiny sand, hoping I won’t step on any glass hidden inside, while I was thinking how I got in this peaceful island. I remembered the night, where Renee, my mom, and Phil, my step-dad, asked me to go to the Rosen Beach in Washington State, as a vacation. They told me, they want me to leave so they can… ‘Knock up’ to make a baby, - my little future sibling. I’m surprised they actually asked me with such an embarrassing excuse… so this is how I got into this. (I answered yes, because I don’t want to accidentally step in to the moment where they do it somewhere. Plus, I don’t want to live under in the same roof…)
It’s really strange, that all I could hear was waves crashing, birds crying, and wind whistling in my ears. No one, I mean, NO ONE, was around the beach. Not even a child, who loves to build sand castles! It felt like a deserted beach, or me being the only one on the planet. The dark clouds rise and went by, covering every single blaze of sunlight. It looked like it was going to rain. I looked up in the sky, to find a single drop of water, dropping on my cheeks. A second later, rain poured and poured and poured. “What the?! How can it rain so hard?!!! Did God drink too much soda for 100 days straight?!!!!!” I said in fury because the water rains down my spine, making me get lots of chills, since the waters so cold. I covered my forehead so that I can stop the rain from going into my eyes. There, I saw with my wet face, a boy my age, staring at me, furiously, making him looking even madder with his brownish, black dripping hair, covering his face. He had gold-like eyes, seeming to be cute, but still evil like. If he was smiling, I knew he could kill 100, no, 1,000 woman with his charming looks, in a heartbeat!! I won’t be taken so easily, cause I sworn I would never love again, as long as I’m a human being. God I wish I could control the weather!!! I frowned, murmuring to myself. The stupid rain is pissing me off!!! I stopped my head from thinking so much so I can go back to reality. I looked in front of me, where the boy was used to standing there, but had disappeared into mid air.
“Huh? Where is he?” I asked to myself out loud. A loud thunder shocked me out of the blue… I jumped back as a surprised reaction, hitting something on my back. Hands hold my upper arms, I looked up, and I found the tall boy, who disappeared a while ago, back in human form. His eyes were furious but he putted up a smile… a smirk, or whatever. His hair was straight while it slithers around with the wind blowing. He looked so evil!!! I was scared to death of what he’ll do to me. He’s starting to freak me out with his evil aura around him.
“Hello, miss. Why are you so wet and your arms so smooth?” he asked me with his deep voice, looking even more evil with his smirk and narrow eyes. I was scared, more scared of what’s going to happen. My heart was beating very, very fast. I started to tremble with fear as I looked at him. I started to feel tears in my eyes.
“Uhh…” he said, releasing my arms, surprised with my reaction, “sorry, I di-”
“AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!” I yelled out running.
I kept run, afraid. Run, Bella, run!!!! Run for your life!!! He might kill me if I ruin his image!!!!! Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! He might murder me after I get rapped!!!! HELP!!!!!
I looked back; he was running smiling even wider. Uh-oh!!!!!!
“No!!!!!!! Stop chasing me!!!!!” I yelled back at him, as I kept running.
I stepped on something which gave me a sharp pain. Shoot! My slippers came off!!! I stepped on glass, which I hoped I wouldn’t, but God just hates me. I fell down when I couldn’t take the sharp pain. Owwwwwwww!!!
A loud thunder roared around the beach, while the water knocks on the cliffs, big and load. A big shadow came up, a darker shadow than the shadow of the clouds upon me. I looked up. There he was the perverted devil!!!!
“Don’t kill me please!!! I don‘t care if you take me alive! Just don’t kill me!!!” I yelled in front of him, closing my eyes shut.
“Hehhh~? Take you alive? You’re willing to? Don’t mind me do.” he whispered in my ear to neck. I can imagine his face! I shivered. I was scared. I want to take it bad, even if I have to die, I don’t want no regrets if I have to die!
I felt his warm breath on my neck. God… really… why do you hate me?!!! I would curse you if I wasn’t Christian!!! Ahhhh!!! I can’t maintain this!!! He can’t expect me to do nothing!!! Stop already!!!
“Cut!!!! That‘s enough!”
I opened my eyes to find a beautiful woman my age, putting her hand on the guys face, forcing him to stop. In her hand was a video taper. I bet she was taping something before she saw me.
“Sorry for my idiotic brother. He thought it was fun to tease you. You’re Bella right? We… well… I have been waiting for you. He thought you were a trespasser. I didn’t tell him that you were coming. He just got a bit worked up. My name’s Alice, nice to meet you.” Alice said to me.
“It seems to me that it was your plan for me to kill her.” he said suspiciously.
My heart started to beat fast, the reason I do not know. “umnghhhh… Be-Bella me.” I said with my voice shaking. “umnghhhh…” I started to cry unconsciously, no help but a cry, and can’t stop.
“Bella???? Look at what you did, Edward, you idiot!!!” she punched Edward on this muscular arm.
“Noooo. It wasn‘t his fault.” I said as I tried to dry up my tears with my hands. “Its just that, it surprised me that it was a joke, an-and, I got so worried over nothing. I‘m too dramatic when I’m thinking… sorry.”
“Honey, honey, honey… don’t apologize, it was the idiot’s fault.” Alice said, pointing to the man looking shamed of his actions.
“I know… I‘ll curse him for what he did to me.” I said with no doubt in my voice. “Are you willing to pick a fight?” Edward said to me smirking.
“Yeah. Easy to beat a face like that. One punch and its all over.” I said, picking a fight with much more effective feelings. My tears were all gone too. “Okay, okay. Its still raining so fight inside before you get a cold.” Alice said to break up the aura between us two. I tried to stand up. “Oww. My foot hurts!” I said standing on one foot. “Here, let me help.” Edward said as he came closer to me with kinder eyes than the ones I first saw. “No. I don‘t want help from an idiot.” I said, acting like a spoiled kid. Thunder, yet again, cracked the sky in two. It was the biggest one I ever heard which made me jump. “Whoa!!!” my foot accidentally tripped, like always. “Ah!”
“Bella!” Edward yelled, as he grabbed my waist, and fell on top of me.
SNAP!!! I looked over to see Alice taking a picture of me and Edward lying down, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, KISSING!!!!! It was a lip to lip smooch. I tasted something sweet, cherry sweet. Edward got off me. He smirked the evil smirk… the perverted smirk!!! “Uh-oh. Bella, he seems fired- up.” Alice said, smiling at me. “Bella… where‘s my candy?” he asked me. “Um, in my mou-” I said while he interrupted with an other smutty kiss!!! Help me, God! The candy was removed from my mouth, to his. SNAP, SNAP, SNAP, SNAP, AND SNAP!!! I fainted, hearing the snap of the camera keep going. “Too much to handleeee~” I said going down with a heated face. “Bella?” I heard angel voices saying my name as I went bye-bye.
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- Title: twilight human version
- Artist: Angel_Amu
- Description: The full Chapter. Plz rate and comment. I do not own Twilight characters... just to let you know. its a fan fiction XD my own imagination and romance knowledge did this so tell me if you like it or not to let me decide if im going to put chapter 2.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: romance story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hanamura Kana - 03/16/2009
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why r u trying to rip off twilight??
the story is fine, you just need to use your own characters. srry.
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- Chomp Chomp Dead - 12/13/2008
- write it all plz,its good,5/5
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- Angel_Amu - 12/13/2008
- it's only part of chap. 1 cause its too freakin long!! T^T plz rate. I don't care if you put bad comments(though i would get upset cause u insult my work T^T), cause it might help me improve. (might...)
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