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Introduction: There were two orphans. One was 19 (the boy) and the other was 8 (the girl). The boy had been taking care of the girl (since they were brother and sister and they had no one else to look after them) The little girl was getting ready for a sleepover and her older brother was driving her there. The boy grabbed a piece of bread before he left. He was diabetic and he didn't want to drive with some carbs. Anyways they walked outside, it was really cold. Colder than usual and colder than predicted. The little girl, Heather, tells her older brother that she thought she heard something. The brother thought it was just the wind...
This demons eyes were glowing red
from knowing someone would soon be dead
One was getting ready for bed
The other was eating a slice of bread.
Cold and snowy was the weather.
He pulled out a knife, sharper than ever
He tried to act as light as a feather
Then he quickly killed Heather.
The boy screamed, he was filled with fright
He was filled with fear on this frigid night.
His face grew pale, nearly white.
He tried to run, he tried to fight.
But couldn't stand this demon's bite.
Death was there, it was true
But nobody, nobody ever knew...
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- by Everthings A Miracle_ |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Christmas Time Killer
- Artist: Everthings A Miracle_
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Description:
I felt like doing something I didn't normally do so I made this creepy poem for you. It is poem, but has an introduction so I'll play it safe and put it in to fiction. My Description even has a rhyme scheme, It must be an ongoing theme.
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: christmas time killer
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Angel blood_Devil heart - 01/13/2009
- WOW THAT WAS CREEPY BUT REALLY GOOD 5/5
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- Everthings A Miracle_ - 12/21/2008
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Re: wow... creepy
Muahahahahahahaha! - Report As Spam
- bethy1993 - 12/20/2008
- wow... creepy
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