- The day i saw her face it was like wonders. Love at first sight. I knew she had a great personality from asking around but i was to shy to talk to her. Then one day, she sat by me on the bus. We talked about alot we had alot in common. From that day it became a tradition. Which formed a love. One day she seemed sad. She raised her arm in 6th period socail studies, and she had cuts on her arm noone but i seemed to notice. I confronted her on the bus ,tears stung my eyes "why?" "what do you mean?" "these." I said as i lifted her sleeve. "Its nothing" and she got off at her stop. The next day she didnt show up for school, or the next, or after that. Her mom called one day and explained and said she left you a note. the note said "dear Chris i always loved you. You were my everything" TO BE CONTINUED
- by i_walk_alone232 |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Tears will fall
- Artist: i_walk_alone232
- Description: a story about a death of a kids girlfriend
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: tears will fall
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Comments (4 Comments)
- teenage_superstar - 05/11/2009
- umm does it have ny ending?????
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- Julia Dream - 01/18/2009
- Why is complete crap like this in Spotlight?! I DON'T UNDERSTAND! Spotlight used to be for exceptionally good pieces of work!
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- i_walk_alone232 - 12/23/2008
- if you want to see part i ned time for more gold i have none right now
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- kisa beary - 12/22/2008
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*sniff*
omgosh...so sad....
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