- she runs and runs but all she sees is darkness. her blond hair lie below her knees as she fell to the cold, hard ground in sorrow. she cried and cried in the darkness. she was lost in the forest on a cold, dark, foggy night. she couldn't find anyone. her name was Emily. her shimmering, blue eyes sparkled as with the tears streaming down her cheeks. on the night before she went missing, the one she loved died a horrifying death. he was tortured, beaten, bruised, and cut. until finally he was put out of his pain and suffering. she knew this because she was there. she tried to save him and the others but....... she was too late. the horrible, cruel man tortured them all to death before she could think of a way out. she was forced to watch him kill them all.she would have been next but she was courageous and angry at the sight she still saw of her loves body so brutally ruined. she ran. quickly she dashed as fast as she could into the retched forest. she ran and ran. it began to get cold. too cold for her. she wasn't afraid. she stopped crying as she thought of the murderous night before. and she wasn't afraid to die. she lost her love to a murderer. very soon later, she found a crystal-like stream with a flowery bed beside it. she was very weak. she lie upon the flowery bed and curled into a ball. one last tear fell down her face. her body became colder. there she breathed her last, calm breath. then, as if she didn't die, she rose from her resting place. it wasn't dark anymore. it was like a beautiful valley. lit with no sun but shining stars. she looked around, breathlessly. to her left, she saw mountains. to her right, she saw a forest. in front of her was the lovely, crystal-like stream.she stood up. she heard a familiar voice. she quickly turned around. she saw him. no bruises. no cuts. just as she saw him before his murder. she has found him. in this heavenly place. she found him again. she ran to him. arms wide open. then he gently kissed her lips. they finally found each other, where their love can be forever.
- Title: Darkness
- Artist: xMsPanda
- Description: this story is of a girl who fell in love and watched her poor, sweet lover be tortured to death. as she runs and runs, she finally dies, she finds what she has always wanted, she is happy again. please comment kindly i worked hard on this it took all social studdies, math, and language arts classes! lol
- Date: 01/14/2009
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xMsPanda - 06/05/2010
- i did make it a bigger story but i didnt feel like posting the longer one cause it was much to long
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- Ray of Mel - 01/22/2009
- Great, has the makings of somthing so much better though. It seems to slur ideas alot. might be better if you broke it into paragraphs and expanded on your ideas. has the essence of twighlight righting (btw not a compliment)
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- Pikarat - 01/18/2009
- This is so sweet!
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- the_fallen_stars_song - 01/14/2009
- its so sweet i like it touching
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