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CHAPTER ONE. WOW!this is our hotel momma?!?hey momma,is there any more girls besides me? yeah.i heard theres onix and runa.cool,where are they?room 66. O.O ,lotta rooms....,can we meet them can we,can we?!?sure ill leave you here,your 16 now you can take care of yourself now rimona.i have to go to on a job to new mexico selling hotels,kk? kk moma.bye!well time to go see onix and runa! stair1..............2............3............4..............5..................ect. dang thats long huff-puff!what?THERE WAS A ELEVATER RIGHT THERE scream ?!?.........hi,im rimona.nice to meet you rimona!im onix,and im runa!cool!rimona?hmm?wanna goto the park?sure.race ya down!hahahaha,hahahahahahahahaha,weeeeee hahahahahahaha!ahhh,ow!i tripped on the stairs....,you ok?i ges so....come on,we will carry you.o-ok,thx!man runa your heavy!i just get hereand i got to carry someone...... SRRY GOT TO GET OFF,ILL FINISH THE CHAPTER AS A NEW ONE!FOR NOW WILL YOU TELL ME WATYA THINK!
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- Title: freinds forever! a story.
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more chapters were that came from!:D - Date: 01/15/2009
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- Kishin_Mistress - 01/24/2009
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wut is yours?
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- xDemonxOfxDeathx - 01/19/2009
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Sorry but that's really bad. If you made it a bit more organized then it would be pretty good. You also need to make it clear who is talking and get rid of the emotes. If you made those changes, it would be great. 2/5
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