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well...i should get going to lunch....i got up from my bed looking around for Mrs.Flagon but i couldnt find her so i just signed myself out...i dont think she would mind....i walked down the blue and gold hallway thinking about that dream...i couldnt get it off my mind....i finally got to the lunch room...i scanned the area looking for Axel...but...he wasnt there...so i picked up a trey and got in line for my food...the food here stinks...seriously...it does...the only thing that i could stomach was a peice of bread...i walked over to my lunch table where Lily, Kelly, and Jen sat..."hi guys..."i said depressingly "whats wrong Jac?" Lily asked worried. "nothing..." Jen spoke up "she probably triped down the hallway and landing in the boys locker room!" Jen is my sister from another mother as i call her. we have been friends since pre K ... but she has now become my evil twin as i call her....Kelly laughed. Lily dipped her fingers in water and splashed them with water. "whatever!" Jen said madly "EW EW EW!!! LILY! IM ALL WET!!" Kelly yelled. "uh...yeah ok" Lily replied. i giggled a little. we sat and talked the rest of lunch period. for once i had my mind off of Axel...just once
After lunch Jen and i walked to our next class....math....i was pretty good at math but Jen was a genius! she has always gotten better grades then me. she was an amazing at drawing too...she has the nicest Bf in the world. his name is Sam, Sam Dough, he is on the football team he has straight As and always takes Jen to the nicest places. i have never had a Bf before....i think im ugly, but everyone says im beautiful and graceful...but......nevermind! on with math!
In math i sat next to Mike, Kelly sat two desks behind me...i always felt that she was always looking at me...like a lion staring down its food...weird...Mike looed over to me "so what movie do you wanna see tomorrow?" he asked. "it doesnt matter, it up to you." he laughed. "you have always been like that!" he said i smiled. i opened my mouth to say something but Mrs. Birdturd i mean Mrs. Burton walked in the room...she is the meanest teach ever! she always gave us too much homework. and no one ever gets 100s on her tests. most of the rtme i get Bs... "Settle down class..." she said. no one settled. she sighed "SHUT UP!!" everyone hushed "thats better...now! open your books to page 200!" i pulled out my book from my purple white backpack we will be learning about functions! everyone rolled their eyes. she laughed as she started to explain everything. i tried to keep up but i couldnt...that dream was still getting to me....i tried to find a way to think it out but i couldnt...my mind was going to explode...then thats it!i found out what it meant! so simple! easy! its-"Jac! what are you doing! your not even looking your book! what is wrong with you!" Mrs. Burton snaped "oh im sorry Mrs.bird- Mrs. Burton" i said almost laughing "Hmph!" she said. everyone giggled. finally math class ended...
I walked out of the class room with my head down...i had the idea...but i lost it...damn...i bumped into someone and fell and my butt. "ow..." i looked up to see Axel smiling down at me "need help?" he asked as he helped me up "sorry Axel" i said quickly. "its my fault" he said with a smile. i wanted to hug him...buti couldnt...i wish that these feeling would go away...i wish....i darted around him quickly...i ran out of the school building running home...i ran in my house and quickly shut the door i dropped my books...stupid Axel!! stupid! stupid! sexy...hot amazing...what! no! no!!! keep focus! keep focus! i had already finsihed my homework...so i decided to say in and put on my PJs...
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- Title: ~love story part 4~
- Artist: iloveyourmomsllama14
- Description: part 4~~
- Date: 01/20/2009
- Tags: love story part
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- la Reina de calabaza - 01/21/2009
- Great! I like it! I give it a 5/5
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- Chibi_Riki - 01/20/2009
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I'm going to assume from 'Axel' this is a KH love story, correct?
(Giving you a critique and advice, please don't take offense~ D8 )
Why do I feel like this has self-insertion in it? While writing, especially fanfics, that can make the character a Mary Sue.
Also, the capitalization and punctuation are a little... XD Yeaaah...
Try watching that, 'kay~? <3 - Report As Spam