- As I, Alexander, walked down the hallway on the first day of school, I saw her, the most beautiful girl I have ever seen in my whole life. I mean, she completes me! I didn't know what to say but " Hi. I like your shirt." What was I thinking! I mean whoa, that came out of nowhere! Well, getting back to my story, she just smiled and walked away. The best thing in class was that she sat next to me. I could just imagine us running in the favorite flowers on a hill. We could kiss at the basketball game or even hold hands. Pulling me out of my thought she say " Do you know where the science lab is?" I just stuttered. How stupid was that?! To the girls of my dreams, how could all of my wonders come true when I don't even talk to her? After lunch, I walked to the field alone. All I could think about was Gabriela. But then my best friend Jason comes and punch me on the back. " Hey dude,(what he calls everybody) lets play FOOTBALL!!!!" he screams at me.In the game I finally caught the ball. I ran as fast as I can. But I heard a *Bonk* and then people gasping. I look down and there was Gabriela lying there unconscious. I looked around if nobody was going to do. I'll do it. So I picked her up and when to the office. It felt good when her sweaty head was on my shoulder. Just then I saw the biggest cut on her knee. I jumped and I almost dropped her. the nurse wasn't there. It was her day off. So I just sat down in the office, holding her like.... someone I love. A person did finally come she said " Oh my god. You must have been waiting. You could put her down on the bed." I just sat there nodded my head and finally said " It's okay. I want to hold her." I was pretty sure Gabriela didn't hear me. But then I saw her open her eyes then suddenly KISSED me. It ended pretty well.
- by RoseHerRocks |
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- | Submitted on 01/20/2009 |
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- Title: The Crush
- Artist: RoseHerRocks
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Description:
About a boy named Alexander, that liked a girl Gabriela. This is a true story. But I'm reading from the boy's view.
- Date: 01/20/2009
- Tags: love
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- beau120 - 06/20/2009
- Please take the time to re-write this story, possibly with a new plot, more-developed characters, a new style and proper grammar. Maybe then I'd read it the whole way through.
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