mine....

• Artist: LolliFrogg
• Description: i got the idea wen i was doing homework....... vampires and werewolves hav been in war for a long while what happens wen one's blood is both vampire nd wolf. These are her thoughts.
  
  PS: Im not very good in spelling.
• Date: 01/23/2009
• Tags: vampires werewolves feud mine

The unsubdued war between the vampires and wolves is as old as age. A fatal accident had occured. I happened. I was the result of a forbidden love. I am part vampire and werewolf. I am invincible. I have killed countless without remorse. My body has no heart. My mind has no conscience. And I will live forever.
My parents have paid for their betrayal. Their kind have dealt with them. Fifty years I have been hunted. I am young and my body is that of a child's but I am wise, cunning, swift, and invincible. Only once I have been caught through the cooperation of the clans. A truce. I escaped in a matter of hours. The war is still going on but half of each clan is looking for me.
None is like me. No one is half of both. I am alone in the world. Feared by the clans and I will not stoop to the level of humans. But soon I will reign the world. No one will defy me. I am higher than everyone else.Everyone will fear me or death. Freedom isn't something they can't fight for because no one can fight and win against me. The world will soon be mine. All creatures will bow before me.

Comments

[Isabaee]

it sound like bayonette mixed with twilight in a way...but who knows...if it was a manga...maybe....

[PoisonousMoonlight]

this is a kind of evil thing but i like it anyway

[Empress Miramusa]

I agree with Klaora, and well be careful when doing overdone subjects. Most people will just think it's another of that story like Klaora said.

[Klaora]

It sounds interesting, but before you start, I highly suggest a Mary-Sue litmus test just in case, simply because it is a cliche subject. Written correctly with well thought out characters, it can easily become a success, but make a mistake and it'll be tossed aside and written off as "another vampire story." Careful: you're treading on thin ice, but if you make it across without falling in, I think you'll be celebrated
Here's my personal favorite test: http://katfeete.net/writing/marysue.html