- There once was a lady name Jermia and she was dangerous if u look at her she would start bleeding and your head would start spinning and you would look and act like her.Her mother was killed by her uglyness.Then she would try to haunt you if you talk about you.She is there but you dont know it she will get you u will be so acared you would pea on yourself.she is fake her skin come off if u walk pass her if you go in her house it will eat you beacause her house is fake just like her if u dont want to be killed stay awake and remember this she is every where oh yeah .!!!!!boo.!!!!!
- by beautiful kimora1 |
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- | Submitted on 01/29/2009 |
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- Title: THE BLOOD LADY
- Artist: beautiful kimora1
- Description: There is a lady she is scary !!boo.!!
- Date: 01/29/2009
- Tags: blood lady
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ii_BangWiffNoPants - 02/03/2009
- You best not use as other people say IM wording. You must use proper grammar. If you use proper grammar you will get better ratings.
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- Varvendale - 02/03/2009
- what the hell are you saying?
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- Held In Focus - 01/29/2009
- Don't use chat speak, that's poor writing. Your grammar and sentence structure are, to be blunt, terrible. I didn't even understand what story there was to that. I'm sorry, but that's horrible writing. Please take the time and edit your work.
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