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Sam: Worse than Misa biggrin
Light: Oh god..........
Marisa: We'll try and keep the noise volume down. ^_^
Sam: We make no promises!
Marisa: This'll be a first! biggrin
Light: Oh God. WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!?
Marisa: It's Sasuke-niisan! biggrin
Sam: Why him!?
Marisa: I actually don't know why he's here. XD
Sam: WELL THAT HELPS!!!
Sauske: Hello Light-dono ^.^
Light: I thought I told you to stop calling me that .
Sauske: I'm sorry Light-sama! *falls to knees*
Light, Marisa, and Sam: *sigh*
Marisa: Why are you here Sasuke-niisan? Shouldn't you and Naruto-kun be training?
Sasuke: Well I heard that you got hurt so I came to see what was wrong.
Sam: SHE'S FINE SASUKE-KUN! You can go now!
Light: Please!?
Sasuke: No I think I'll stay.
Light: I DEMAND TO GO TRAIN WITH NARUTO!!!!
Sauske: Yes sir!!!!!!!!!! *runs off*
Sam: Finally.
Marisa: I swear my niisan has got to get new hobbies instead of going back to being emo. *shivers* Never again. AND I WENT EMO WITH HIM!!! NEVER AGAIN!!!
Sam: WHAT IN THE NINE HELLS!?!?!?
Light: I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU TO GO TRAIN WITH NARUTO-KUN!?!?!?
Sasuke: He said that he had to go home. So I get to hang with you guys! biggrin
Marisa: *takes out cell phone* Hey mom? Can you tell Sasuke-niisan to go home please? Thanks! ^^ Yeah mom wants you to go home Sasuke-niisan.
Sasuke: *takes out cell phone* Hey mom, Marisa-shisuta broke her ankle razz WHAT!? Fine I'll come home. *to Marisa* You always get your way.
Marisa: That I do! ^_^
Sam: That she does, bye Sauske razz
Sauske: I'll be back!
Marisa: Quiet Swartzenagger!
Sam: Well we're here!
Marisa: And as usual Kakashi-senei's late!
Sam: I know.
Light: Is this the ninja that’s always late?
Marisa and Sam: Yup! :3
Light: Greaaaaaaat
Sam: Yup always dead late, then he'll show up and say.
Kakashi: *poofs in* sorry, guy's, I got lost on the trail of life.
Marisa and Sam: NO YOU DIDN'T!!!!
Kakashi: Riiight well lets get started *sees Light* Why's he here.
Light: Marisa-chan broke her ankle.
Kakashi: Then you should be resting....
Marisa: TO HELL WITH RESTING!!!!!
Kakashi: You're a medical ninja and you don't want to take proper care of yourself!? What has Hokage-sama been teaching you?
Marisa: Who cares!? Let's train!
Sam: YEAH!
Light: Be careful Marisa-chan.
Marisa: Ok! ^_^
Sam: *to Marisa* You're not gonna take it easy are you?
Marisa: *to you* Nope! ^.^
Sam: Not surprised okay lets go! *charges in*
Kakashi: *grabs Sam by neck collar* Hold on there. We can't get in until 6 pm. But that's in five minutes so you guys should be able to chill out until then. ^_^
Marisa and Sam: WHY 6!?
Kakashi: They wouldn't tell me.
Marisa: WHO!?
Kakashi: The people that are in charge of this place. ^_^
Sam: *sarcastically* Oh that's great!
Light: I still don't think you should do this Marisa-chan. :S
Marisa: To hell with that! In we go! *charges the gates*
Random Anbu guard: Oh no you don't. 6 o' clock, and you probably shouldn't go in there on that ankle.
Marisa: Screw you!!!!
ANBU: *takes out sword* I said: you shouldn't go in there on that ankle.
Marisa: And I said: screw you!
ANBU: *takes off mask* * uses sharingan* I said no.
Marisa: *terrified* NO ITACHI-NIISAN DON'T DO THIS TO ME!!! I HAVE TO TRAIN!!!
Itachi: *concerned* I don't want you to get hurt any further.
Light: I'll make sure she's safe.
Itachi: You better!
Marisa: WHY ARE YOU PEOPLE SO CONCERNED ABOUT ME!?!?!?
Light and Itachi: No reason.
Sam: Why are you ONLY concerned about HER and not ME?!?!?
Light and Itachi: Again, no reason.
Marisa and Sam: *sighs* HEY LOOK IT'S 6 LET'S GO!!!
Itachi: HOLD IT RIGHT THERE YOU 2!!!
Marisa and Sam: WHAT!?!?!?
Itachi: I'm coming with you to make sure that Marisa-shisuta is safe!
Marisa: I ALREADY GOT LIGHT-KUN COMIN WITH US I'M SURE WE'LL BE FINE!!!
Itachi: He's not a ninja you guys need more back up!
Sam: BUT KAKASHI-SENSEI IS A NINJA!!!
Itachi: I'm still coming!
Marisa and Sam: *sighing* FINE!
Sam: I’m not even gonna ask let's go!!!!! *charges in*
Marisa: *charges behind* Hey Sam-kun.... *falls* AH!!!!!!!
Light, Itachi, Kakashi, and Sam: MARISA-CHAN!!!!!
Marisa: How threw that at me!? Uhhh. * passes out*
Itachi: MARISA-SHISUTA!!!!!!!!!!!!! *some tears*
Light: I'll go get help! Sam-kun! You make sure she's still breathing!
Sam: OK!
Kakashi: I'll get that kunai out of her chest.
Itachi: NO!!! THAT'LL CAUSE A BIGGER LOSS OF BLOOD!!!
Sam: I don’t feel a pulse! :,(
Kakashi and Itachi: WHAT!?!?!?
Itachi: I know CPR! Marisa-shisuta taught it to me a couple years ago.
Sam: *judges trajectory of the kunai* a*****e! *fires fireball in general direction*
Itachi: *beginning CPR* A little help please!
Kakashi: *jumps towards enemy* I'll hold them off!
-5 minutes later-
Marisa: *gasps for air* *coughs* What's going on?
Itachi: Oh thank God you're alive!
Marisa: Of course I'm...... WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED!?!?!?
Itachi: Someone threw a kunai straight at your heart and it made it. We thought you were *cries*
Sam: Apparently the attacker must be one of your old rivals that made enemies with you and wants you dead. That, or it could be an assassin.
Marisa: Wait, where's Light-kun?
Itachi: He went to go get help.
Kakashi: Itachi-san I know you're still upset but I could really use your help here! The enemy is stronger than I thought!
Sam: Itachi you keep helping Marisa-chan! I'll back up Kakashi! *uses kekkei genkai and transforms into a dragon* RROOOAARR!!!
Marisa: *amazed* Wow I can't believe Sam-kun learned to do that while I was in Tokyo! *tries to get up* Hey! PUT ME DOWN NIISAN!!!
Itachi: I have to get you out of here it's not safe for you in your condition! *runs with Marisa towards the village*
Marisa: BUT I CAN HELP! I'm fine...... *another passing out spell*
Itachi: Oh no! *runs towards hospital
Sam: *laying waste to the enemy* Damnit Marisa-chan how many folk did you piss off!?!?!?!
Kakashi: Who cares? This means Marisa wasn’t the only target! A force this size is raiding the village!
Sam: *looks at direction of the enemy is going in* THEY'RE GOING THE SAME WAY ITACHI-SENPAI IS GOING WE HAVE TO CATCH UP TO THEM!!!!!!
Kakashi: NO! I'll go after them! You go warn the Hokage-sama!
Sam: HAI!
-Back to Itachi and Marisa-
Itachi: *panting* Oh no, what now!? HUH! ROUGES! AND A LARGE FORCE AT THAT!!!
Marisa: *waking up* mmmm..... wh-what's happening?
Itachi: We're being followed!
Marisa: *still weak* by who?
Itachi: Rouge sound ninja!
Marisa: *shocked* GET ME AWAY FROM THEM!!! GET ME AWAY FROM THEM!!!
Itachi: *confused* What?
-Back to Sam-
Sam: *flapping for the village and landing on Tsunade's roof*
Tsunade: What the hell was that?!?!?
Sam: *sticking head in window* Sound the alarm Tsunade-sama! MASSIVE force of enemy ninja on the way!!!!
Tsunade: WHAT!?!?!? WHERE'S MARISA-CHAN!?!?!?
Sam: She's out of commission.
Tsunade: *concerned* What do you mean?
Sam: HER ANKE'S BROKEN AND SHE WAS STABBED IN THE HEART BY ONE OF THE ENEMY!!! Itachi-san is taking her to the hospital but a separate group is following them!
Tsunade: Ok we need all jonin here at once! Got that!?
Sam: HAI! *runs out*
Tsunade: Could they be here for the Kyuubi. But why would they go after Marisa-chan? HUH? HER DEMON!!!
Sam: *hears that last bit* What the hell?
Tsunade: I said jonin! Get them NOW!!!
Sam: Hai, Tsunade-sama! *runs off*
-Back with the others-
Itachi: *running like hell* Common Marisa-shisuta! Wake up!
Kakashi: Is she awake?
Itachi: No she passed out again. What could they be here for?
Kakashi: Well Naruto-kun isn't scared for his life so not the Kyuubi.
Itachi: And they're really not terrorizing the village so that leaves one more explanation.
Kakashi: Yeah. Your little shisuta's demon!
Itachi: *tearing* Come on Marisa-shisuta wake up! We need you!
-In Marisa’s mind-
Marisa: hm? Where am I? *hears evil laughter* *wields kunai* Who's there!?
Demon: *evil voice similar to Kyuubi's* Come a little close girl.
Marisa: Who are you!? TELL ME!!!
Demon: *laughs* I'm the 8-tailed demon Kirameki!
Marisa: *scared* WHAT?
-Back to reality-
Gai: Let’s go everyone! For the Leaf! *leads counter assault*
Sam: *flying over the field* That's done, better check on Marisa-chan *sends out mind probe*
-In Marisa’s head-
Demon: *laughing evilly* Now I shall take over this body and destro....what?
Sam: *rising up behind Marisa* And you are?
Demon: I'm Kirameki, the 8-tailed wolf demon. I was sealed inside this girl 15 years ago by a man called: Jiraiya!
Marisa: I'VE HAD A DEMON INSIDE ME FOR MY ENTIRE LIFE!?!?!?
Sam: How could you not know Marisa-chan!?
Marisa: No one told me so I really never knew. Wait what's happening!? AH! SAM-KUN HELP!!! I THINK KIRAMEKI IS TRYING TO MAKE ME USE HER POWER!!!
Sam: I'M TRYING BUT IT'S TOO POWERFUL!!!
Marisa: SAM-KUUUUUUUUN!!!
-Back to reality-
Itachi: What's forming around her?
To be continued...............
- Title: Demon Issues: Pages 4-6 of 26
- Artist: Pandamett
- Description: Well now I got the next 3 pages up. ^.^ I know don't tell me, I'm lazy. We do have about 26 pages but because of other stuff I didn't have much time to post anything. XD Edit: Every time a new page gets set I'll edit the title(s) accordingly.
- Date: 02/09/2009
- Tags: demon issues pages
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Pandamett - 05/06/2009
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For Misa Amane -Shinigami__o
Thank you for putting your reasoning in detail that actually helps. It's a fanfic gone insane so the characters can be OOC. This story already got to about 6o something pages so I don't think there's a chance of me editing all of that XD though I might get to it during sumer break if I'm not working and have nothing better to do with my time. - Report As Spam
- Shineeing Cassie - 05/02/2009
- Ei. Hi.I disagree with Kayley FC but at the same time I agree with her. I disagree because there's actually a plot in the story, and you could put anything you want because it's your own story. But I also agree with her because the characters are completely OOC. You should also put your story in a paragraph form, and NOT in a script form. And lastly be more descriptive, don't just let your characters talk all the time, describe what they're doing. I hope this has helped you -^.^-
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- Pandamett - 02/19/2009
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for Kayley FC
first off: cant u tell its basically a fanfic?!
second: i used Japlish cause i could!
third: its not my best work and me and friend were doing this thru pming on youtube! of course there will be many errors when 2 different ppl r working on it!
fourth: some ppl might think its funny! that could u know be a possibility for the MAIN purpose of this! - Report As Spam
- KayleyV2 - 02/19/2009
- I'm sorry, but this has almost not literary qualities. The people are completely out-of-character, there is not really any plot, and you mix Japanese and English for no reason (Japanglish = bad). It's fine to write, since it's for your entertainment value, but it's not something that should be taken seriously by anyone for any purpose. It's good that you have a project, but I can't give this a high rating since it has little value in the literary world.
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- Caesarpon - 02/16/2009
- Very good work! 5/5! Keep it up! ^^
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- spike no go - 02/10/2009
- its pretty funny
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