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tab Lit ever so dimly by the flames of twenty or so candles, the portrait stared down at my kneeling form. The man's gold eyes had held much warmth for me in the past, but now they portrayed only sorrow and regret. His facial features had a hint of royalty to them, but he did not act like the king he was, nor did he seem to me as such. A single coffin stood among the candles, empty, for there was no body to place inside it.
tab The small shrine dedicated to the memory of my husband had many visitors, but myself and our daughter, Kyrana, were foremost among them. The Sartokians loved their king, and I loved my husband, who had shown me such kindness and compassion in the days of hardship, even long before he left to embark on the journey to the next realm.
tab Zarek Draechenstan was a man of tall stature, a man born and raised within a royal family but laughed with beggars and wagered with thieves. He loved me, his wife, unconditionally. His other loves were his four children, Kyrana, Justinian, Dawn, and Nathan. Aside from being the perfect family man, he was a fierce soldier and a devoted commander of his people. It was in his desire to protect this land from evil and injustice that lay his demise. His supreme honor and commitment had drawn even the warriors of the Tyr Alt to cease fighting and mourn the loss of such a fine adversary.
tab One by one the candles flickered and lost their blaze of life as I sent up a thousandth prayer, that I would not have to suffer alone for much longer. that I would soon avenge the life and soul of Zarek Arago Draechenstan. I would find his body, and he would be properly laid to rest within the crypts of the royal family.
tab His memory would not be tainted by the indignation, the humility, of his body being lost to us. his legacy as the greatest man and monarch ever to exist in the whole of Rijavvid would live on for milennia to come.
tab I would make sure of that.
- by Wolfgang_anw |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/21/2009 |
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- Title: Legacy
- Artist: Wolfgang_anw
- Description: This is a side story to a series I am working on. I experiment with different scenarios featuring the characters, and this one sends sort of a chill down my spine. I dunno why. This is told from the point of view of Sarraian Draechenstan.
- Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: legacy sidestory fantasy death memorial
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Wolfgang_anw - 09/01/2009
- The book doesn't have a permanent title yet, but I'm calling it Saga of the RiverQueen, or SoTR for short.
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- ElectraShocked - 07/25/2009
- Your publishing a book? What's it called, because I would LOVE to read it, you're a very talented writer.
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- Wolfgang_anw - 02/28/2009
- Why thank you riaishott. I'm working on the original story, though, and I want that to be published before I enter this story in any contests.
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- riaishott - 02/24/2009
- BRAVO!Good descipition and delightful sorrow and hardshp words . Has a lot of momentom!Gee what a reallly good stprys . You should enter it in a contest!(HAW HAW) 5/5
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- Wolfgang_anw - 02/23/2009
- Gee, thanks. Being repetitive is one of the things I'm trying to get over, but it seems to be a higher wall than I expected.
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- Gravetye - 02/23/2009
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It's not bad. The sentence, though, where you say, "He loved me, his wife, unconditionally..."--you might want to take out "his wife," because you already made it known to the reader that that's what she is in the previous paragraph. It's just a tad bit repetative. But you're obviously a pretty talented writer. I hope to see more from you. smile
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- Wolfgang_anw - 02/21/2009
- Please rate and comment! The only good rating I've gotten is from my best friend, and I only trust strangers to be brutally honest about my work.
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