- As coraline was sitting on the couch somthing seemed strange what was it....she looked at the clock it was 10:00 pm her mom would have told her to go to bed already somthing was wrong.She looked around the house calling "MOM" no one would answare as she walked in the kitchen she saw her mom.Hi mom she said her mother looked at her with a blank face "Who are you" asked her mom .Nice joke mom said coraline im your daughter.I dont have a daughter said coralines mom i have a son named jeffy.Coraline was shocked and frightend she flew out of the house into the darkness of the night.She fled to her tree house in the woods behind her house.She cried not because she was sad because she was scared. she thought "what did i do"She fell asleep..She woke up in the morning looked at her watch it said 9:00 am.She was confused for a moment then remembered that she was no longer welcomed at her warm cozy loving home.She started to cry she thought "what am i going to do im a 10 yr old girl and im alone in the woods".It was turning night she made a fire and went to bed she thought "maybe things will be right tommorrow".She woke up but she wasnt in her tree house she was at a hospital she looked around her family was by her side"Hi mom" said coraline "Hello coraline"said her mom "What happend" asked coraline "Ill explane coraline" You see it was late one night when we yelled for you ...you said one minute mom i came to your tree house when u started to come down u missed the ladder and fell out of the tree house "Oh"said coraline......That explaines alot she said smiling The End
- Title: the happening
- Artist: kiki601
- Description: this is about a girl lost in her mind when people dont remember her but she can remember every one else
- Date: 03/15/2009
- Tags: happening
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kiki601 - 05/17/2009
- iv never even heard of this title being anywhere so its not copyright
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- aniger97 - 05/02/2009
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it kinda sounds like ur copying something.... plz put correct capitalization and punctuation cuz i cant really understand it.
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- Luminene - 04/11/2009
- Um...it seems like you copyrighted the title...PLEASE READ SOME OF MY STORIES! biggrin (cause no one ever does!and it would be nice if you did!)
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- Xxsorrow_memoriesxX - 03/29/2009
- this needs a little more detail. you should also check where you place your quotation marks. i think its good, check out my writing. keep it up!
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- Wicked Muzic - 03/18/2009
- that was really kool........u should check out some of my stories smile
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- Captain jake102 - 03/15/2009
- yo yo yo oh idk y i did this comment!!!
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- Captain jake102 - 03/15/2009
- Hey kiki i was just wondering why you thought of this story comment mine Bye
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