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One day a girl named Jessa Wilson walked down a dark and scary ally, when she saw a old man against the dumpster. She went to ask what was wrong, but then once she touched him he fell to the cement ground. The next day she was thinking about what had happened to him. Wondering if it was suicide, murder, or a gang attacked him. He had cuts every where and i purple mark around his neck. She went to the police and told him to get the file on the old man. It turns out his name is James Johnson hes 67 ,Brownish Grey hair , green eyes and had a birth mark on his left shoulder. She found out his wife's name was Jakie Johnson and she lived nearby. She walked to her house to see if she knew who did this. When Jessa knocked on the door .... soon the door opened, Jessa said Hello are you Jakie Johnson. Jakie said yes, She could see the blue eye glare the sun when she looked into her eyes. Jessa asked to come in. They went into the house and Jakie was telling Jessa about her husband. When Jessa asked if she knew who did this to him Jackie she burst into tears. Jakie are you ok said Jessa, yea its just i miss my husband that's it. She said its OK im going to find out who did this to your husband. thank you Jessa, please come back anytime, sure said Jessa. The next day Jessa heard some yelling in the ally, she went to check it out and this girl was laying on the ground surrounded bye 4 guys. Jessa yelled LET HER GO YOU CREEPS. soon the cop sirens went off and the scattered. Hey are you ok. Yea I'm Elizabeth, hey I'm Jessa . Your the girl on the old man case. yup that's me.Well i need to get back to the investigation, bye Elizabeth, bye Jessa. She went to Jakie's house to see if she heard anything the next thing someone knocked on her door. Who is it she asked, its Jimmy. She opens the door and James brother was standing in front of Jakie. Hi im Jessa. She look at his hand as he introduced himself. That's strange, whats wrong Jessa said Jakie. His wrist , there cut. So i cut myelf at work. Jakie tell me does James have a knife. Yes he does . Lock the door Jakie, k Well well well i figured it out it was you your own brother how could you. He was getting in my way i was going to get the inheritances when he died but she got it. I was comin over here to kill her.Then steal the money and get away for it. Then i sent my 4 sons to attack his niece. *whispers to herself* Elizabeth. Yes but you had to be the hero. Yes i love beeing the hero but you know what ..... your busted. The cops came in the house taking him into custody. Thank you so much Jessa. Your Welcome.
THE END
- Title: The Dark Ally
- Artist: iSmexxi_X
- Description: An old man dies in a dark and creepy ally
- Date: 04/08/2009
- Tags: dark ally
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Comments (7 Comments)
- This Ship is Going Down - 01/31/2010
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Looks like I'm going to be that b***h today.
You write like a fourth grader.
You have no form, no flow, and I have no clue how anyone would even think this was good unless they were a fourth grader.
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- DawnSparda - 04/22/2009
- its alright
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- Xx_Loudmouth_xX - 04/10/2009
- Good Good
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- Sparky328 - 04/09/2009
- interesting....[spell check]
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- Slap N Smack_Bleh - 04/09/2009
- Love the story sis goo job smile
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- I_am_Nuthing - 04/09/2009
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An interesting story.I like it. lol
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- Talking Water Fountain - 04/09/2009
- IT"S AWSOME :]
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