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please listen to this while reading it ..it will add some feeling into the story I've written
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Imeem
I didn't mean to kill them...
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_ _ _ _ _ and her Family had just moved to _ _ _ _ _ __ _ School.
She was a normal girl who hangs out with her girlfriends all the time for she never had a boyfriend..
But...
that changed when a POPULAR guy asked her out to some party. She was so excited! SHe asked her parents for their permission but they turned her down. She coudn't just take a No for an answer! it was her first date and first guy, not to mention that hes really hot. Oh yeah. And she just couldn't stay their Friday night in her dull house watching TV.
After she ditch the house... (Parents thought she was asleep in her bedroom)
she went to meet up with her boyfriend. _ _ _ _ _ __ _ (boyfriend) was waiting for her by the parking lot.
While they were in the car, parked in front of the party house.The guy was drunk and the girl was feeling a little uneasy. IT was her first time having a boyfriend so she didn't know how to handle a drunk boyfriend..She didn't know how they would get home.
The guy grabbed her on the shoulders, HARD. Like she's some kind of drug, that he needs to have in order to survive. The girl panicked not knowing what to do, she started to cry.
" Please don't cry. i really don't like girls that cry before i kiss them" He said almost pleading.
"Get off of me! " cried the girl.
"Oh come on. Every girl do this, you know."
He started to strip her clothes off.
"NO! Stop it! I'll do it, just not that far. Please." She begged, through her sobs.
The guy grabbed her face so sudden that the girl almost choked. A little later the girl, had started to kiss him back.
They were on the back of the truck, grabbing each other so fiercely that they have to let go of each other every few seconds. They gasped for breath every once in a while. Pulling each other more closer and tighter.
It was her first time for everything..And she hoped that she would get to do it again.
Finally they came to stopping point. Both of them looked at each other in awe.
The guy finally broke the silence.
" This is your first time isnt it?" He asked, smiling.
"How would you know that?" the girl answered bck in curiosity.
"You were tense the whole time, like you didn't know what to do.."
" Yeah sure. Whatever. Let's just go back home before my parents find out that im not in me bedroom sleeping." She said trying to hide the embarrassment.
"OK. whatever you say Ms. First time .."
Before they set off. The boyfriend took another drink of beer.
"Im driving." Suggested the girl.
"NO. The guy should drive his girlfriend home. OR else I wouldn't be a boyfriend." He said while kissing her on the cheek.
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While driving the guy's vision blurred all of a sudden and lost control of the wheel and ..
all of a sudden there was blackness.
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"Call the ambulance! "
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thE GIRL HAD ON;Y MINUTES LEFT TILL SHE WOULD PASS AWAY...
"Where am I?" She asked, while trying to recall what had just happened."What happened?
"You and your other friend got in car wreck involving another car." said the nurse
The girl immediately asked about her boyfriend. The nurse didnt have to respond to her. It was all written on his forehead.
Hot tears came running down her cheeks. "Will you promise me, that ur going to tell the other passengers that I AM TERRIBLY SORRY FOR WHAT HAD HAPPENED.?"
PLEA........
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Doctor came in.
"Why didnt you say YES to that little girl's last request ..?" asked the doctor solemnly.
" I couldn't,
because
the
passengers
in
the
other
car
were
her
parents..."tab
- Title: i killed them...
- Artist: LimyDee
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Description:
The idea came from my homework last night
I really like writing stories but not so good on it..
this story was written by me just minutes ago and i hope you liked it.
thx for takign your time reading it
- Date: 04/09/2009
- Tags: kill dead
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Comments (4 Comments)
- firefox228 - 10/21/2009
- oh my gosh. that was really good. it was sad, and creative, and unexpected...it was good. i luved it. 5/5
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- x-iiLuvCalum - 04/11/2009
- T.T sad tragedy.. nice work 5/5
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- a-d-m-i-n1033 - 04/09/2009
- AWESOME!! there are little errors in ur writing but i'll give you 4/5 for the effort and creativity! biggrin
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- XxWrecklessIntentionsxX - 04/09/2009
- Wow, I got chills! The ending was so unexpected!
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