- It is march,13,2007 one morning devin got up to go to school first he ate breaktheast his mom says hurry up devin your gonna be late,devin says ok ok im going to my car now,after he got to school he was talking to richard bout silent hill so they decided to go tommorow.The next morning at home devin heard a knock it was richard richard says u ready he says ya so after they got in the car they drove to burger king to eat breaktheast then it was 4 days later.They bought dinner at the gas station near silent hill after that a cop AMED CIVIL BENNET chased us i dident liaten i kept driving suddentley we saw this gohstt form girl and i got knocked out.2hours later devin woke up in silent hill it was a wiird tho it was cold there james was gone he say james dammit whre are u he saw his door open he got out and looked the cop was there she says your under arrested for trespassing after that we walked somw how this blackish monster came with his arms in his skin ,civil shot him bout 2 times then it shot black acid at her helmet,after that we whent in this building and saw a girl run i chased her to see who it was a girl named allysa ,after that i came to this school we met this girl anna i said do u know where my best freind is she said no dont talk im im scared we ingnored her i found a knife put it in my shoe we found room called 111 and it was the classroom of allysa after that the darkness was coming we ran to the chuch this big monster grabbed anna and tore her skin off like a sheet off a bed,we when inside i salll james i yelled James he was gonna get burnt instead i took the knife and killed them all i helped james .Burnt allysa came and killed civil me and james escaped to the car darkness is coming he said we drove to the gas station but it was still comeing we fell off this cliff we blacked out....THE END
- by persistence_of_memory23 |
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- | Submitted on 04/18/2009 |
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- Title: silent hill
- Artist: persistence_of_memory23
- Description: about me and my freind richard going to silent hill but somehow were there for good
- Date: 04/18/2009
- Tags: silent hill
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Dearest Agony - 04/19/2009
- That was way confusing. Did you... I don't know... forget the periods?!!! Not even sure it deserves a 1...
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- BigMouth12349 - 04/18/2009
- A little bit confusing, but creepy. 3/5.
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