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As I slowly drifted back into consciousness, I kept my eyes closed. My head was throbbing. The wind was brushing the tall grass against my face.
After lying on the ground for what seemed like hours, I finally opened my eyes to see that I was lying under a tree. I studied the tree for a while, and I noticed that directly above me it looked as if a branch had recently broken off the tree. I felt a since of Deja Vu after looking up at the tree.
I heard a car drive by somewhere in the distance. The sound, for some odd reason, made me want to sit up. I sat my self up against the tree, my head still throbbing. The grass was so tall that I could barely see over the top as I was sitting against the tree, but, with what I could see, I realized I was sitting on my school’s grounds. I felt a little weird at the school without other students walking around, cursing about teaches and insulting their peers. I kind of enjoyed the peacefulness of it.
- by grimusdave |
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- | Submitted on 04/25/2009 |
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- Title: Beginning of A Murder Story
- Artist: grimusdave
- Description: I wrote this for fun a few months ago... I think I'll continue it into a full flege story soon. I know it's a little short, but it's only the first one I've put on. Tell me what you think anyways, though. Please don't just rate, I like to get feed-back, so please comment if you rate... And rate if you comment.
- Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: beginning murder story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- grimusdave - 05/03/2009
- How should I change it? (Thanks for commenting by the way)
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- VampireGirl738 - 05/03/2009
- you wrote tree too much.... sorry, it bothers me. other than that it's good. 4/5
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- ViolaGothicLolita - 04/26/2009
- this is awesome!!! i'm wondering what happens, u should write more!! smile
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