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Rock music blared into her ears, puonding her eardrums. She thudded upstairs to her attic bedroom, ignoring the yells of her younger siblings, the hushed arguing of her parents. The only reason she was able to ignore it, was the sound of her band, 3OH!3, blasting into her skull.
As I cant do it alone ended, one of her bubble-gum pop Japanese songs started. She skipped it, usually she would've danced to it, but today, right now, she needed her earsplitting rock music.
She rounded a corner and there it was. A black door with Aurora Willow Cypher painted on it in white. It was Auroras' doorway to heaven. No siblings, no parents, just her, her music, her books and her computer. Computer aka her life.
She opened the door. The walls and ceiling were black, with splatters of bright colors all over. Her fluffy carpet was a glorious every color maze. There were three parts to Aurora's Attic. One, her bed area. Two, her 'hang with friends' area. And Three, which practically dominated half her space, was her library and reading area.
- by ShePotterGleek |
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- | Submitted on 05/04/2009 |
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- Title: Unnamed Story
- Artist: ShePotterGleek
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Description:
This is the beginning of a story I thought up today in seventh period. I want to know what people think, so criticize. Heck, if you have an idea I could add into the plot, PM me! I want some Gaian help.
And I'll make her description and more about her life in the next chappie. - Date: 05/04/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ShePotterGleek - 05/20/2009
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Cool, real constructive criticism.
I know nothing really happens, but I just wanted to post what I had before I changed my mind....
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- Nihill - 05/09/2009
- I think you ought to make this chapter longer. Practically nothing happens here, it's not very interesting to the reader. Tell us more about this Aurora character, get us intrigued.
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- jungle elf - 05/08/2009
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i like it!! keep it up!!!
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- 13CharlieeLouu13 - 05/05/2009
- Wow, that's really good! Good luck with your writing!
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