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ch.1
it all started one day after graduation.
it was the 13th. my seventeenth birthday.i wasn't the kind of girl you would go to for guy talk...i was the one with only three friends; Joshua, Collin, and Allyssa. i was also the invisible one.
the ONLY guy i liked was the most popular guy in school and he wouldn't go out with a girl like me. besides; he has a girlfriend, Vanessa. i hated her! i hated everything about her!(( until graduation...heh heh...no i'm just kidding.))i graduated top of the class and she just bought her way out. razz she went to paris for college. and got trampled by a massive pack of shoppers. razz
((okay my parents are like rich...so i got my license last year.))
okay so i got home and i opened my gifts.
i took my three besties to a teens night club.
thats when it happened...
ch. 2
i went to the parking lot go get some air. i took the pack out of my bag and took a piece of gum and stuck it in my mouth. it was yummy.when suddenly i saw a guy down the alley
way...he was very creepy so i went back inside and forgot about him.
me and Allyssa droped off Joshua and collin; then wentback to my house and we did what any teen ager would do when there parentswere gone.((no wedidn't have sex or a party))we got drunk off of hot damn.we were sodrunk we woke up in a place we didn't recognize. it was a one bedroom appartment.andwhen we relized what hadhappened we freaked. we hadbeen kidnapped...((okay fine. teennapped))
ch. 3
there was a note on the fridge. it said:'there are cloths in the closet...don't go out the front door. i will
know and if you do i WILL kill you.' okay that was a little weired. but we had to do something, but what?"hey i've got my phone!"
"you do! omg! get it. we need to get out of here but how?"
"we'll call Joshua and Collin. i'm dialing right now." 'ring ring'"hey that sounds close!" i say. we followed the sound.((okay there was a door that lead to the next room...we snuck out))we saw
Joshua and Collin!((OMFG))we ran to them they were on a death trap.((like in the saw movies)) and there was a recording.'okay girls i know ur listining...so you have to disable this bomb before it kills all of you and you will never see anybody ever again'it said."it's always the red wire thats what my dad's bomb detinator teacher told him" said allyssa.
"okay we need sissors"
"we don't have any"allyssa said
"then we need to get something sharp."i went into the kitchen and someone handed me a knife."thanks"i walked back to the room and cut the wire. the were releced and then somthing clicked. "someone is in here with all four of us"i said. we all freaked...but yet we didn't know who was here...
ch. 4
we stayed in that same room we were so scared that we were going to get killed.we sat and finally Joshua got fed up and went to the kitchen and found brendyn. allyssa went ga ga over him. i was like "big deal he has a hawt body and a cute face but i like someone else.""who????" she begged"i'm not telling you. i just can't you'll say ewwie" but secretly she liked Joshua. okay there was five kid corretion teennapped. and we needed to get out. but we didn't want to get killed.so now that it was around midnight we desided to plan then go to sleep. and the girls got to pick the sleeping arrangements.we planed to break a window by ACCIDENT.and jump down and that we had a phone we called the fire department and we told them where and when to be there. we planded it and we went to sleep and once everyone was asleep except me and Joshua i told him that i liked him as a boyfriend and at that momment we were together. and allyssa and brendyn were together.i know collin is the only one without a girlfriend. i was sad for him=(
ch. 5
okay when we get out i will TRY to set him up with someone. only if i knew someone other than Allyssa.while we were sleeping someone took me and Joshua from our rooms and tied us up and he thretened to kill me unless my parents would pay money to get me and my friends.((ans also my dad is the mayor of my city so yeah.))"i'm better off dead!" i yelled at the man. 'he looks strangly fermiliar. oh s**t! he is the one from the alley'i thought.
"nooo ashlee your not better off dead. your parents will give the ransome.believe me." joshua tried. but the man just put tape over his mouth.
'how can i get over to help him?'i thought."fine don't tell them on camera. you and your boyfriend will suffer..." the man said walking out.
"urrrgh!"i yelled."you a**! get ur a** back in here and untie me!"i said swaying.((and yes i was hung up, but not by my throat by around my arms.))i was doomed untill my knight in shining armor saved me.
- by Bill-is-a-SEXY-Bunny |
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- | Submitted on 05/09/2009 |
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- Title: horror love story
- Artist: Bill-is-a-SEXY-Bunny
- Description: a love story
- Date: 05/09/2009
- Tags: horrer love story
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Spiice_the_wolf - 05/09/2009
- cool..but weres the love? srry i had to ask. this is a good story canu read mine plz?
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