The plans of murder ( part 10)

• Artist: Nanatsuiro-Rainbow
• Description: It's part 10 of " The plans of murder " and It's in Tylers point of view. It's been a week since the funeral.
  
  
  NOTE = most of them ae gonna be in Melissa or Tyler's point of view for now on .
• Date: 05/16/2009
• Tags: plans murder part

I take a deep breath before opening Melissa's door .

She looks worst then she did last time . It looks like she hasn't eaten anything.
Since Juliette died she has been so depressed. " Melissa ? "

" Yes Tyler "

" You should get up and do something "

" I don't want to "

" You should . Juliette wouldn't want this "

" She wouldn't want what ? "

" For you to be depressed "

" I'm not depressed "

" Yes you are " I walk over to the side of her bed and sit down next to her .

" No I'm not "

" I'm not gonna bother fighting with you " She pushes her hair out of her face and that is when I see her wrist. There is atleast ten cuts on it . " What did you do to your wrist ? "

" What are you talking about "

I grab her wrist and turn it so the cuts are facing up " I mean this "

" oh that "

" Ya that . Melissa cutting your wrists isn't the answer "

" Then what is ? "

" Maybe talking "

" To who ? "

" Anyone . Your mom , A doctor , me "

" You weren't here "

" No but you could have called or came over "

" I didn't want to bother you "

I take a deep breath " Melissa I really care about you and I don't want you to hurt yourself anymore " And then I kiss her.

TO BE CONTINUED

Comments

[Nanatsuiro-Rainbow]

Lol Megan I thought it was ovious that he liked her. But maybe I just know my characters too well XD

[Xellica22]

Good but it's a bit confusing though. . . 4/5. mrgreen

[Ethomara]

Um... the ending was really abrupt. I probably wouldn't have put a kiss there I would have done something less subtle. Because there was no indication even when it was in his pint of view that he likes her so it kinda just comes out of nowhere. I find it confusing but that just may be me.