the missing family's

• Artist: razgrezes
• Description:
• Date: 06/15/2009
• Tags: missing familys

as the boys set out to go find there parents they walk up a big hill they look down and see a dark figure what is that thing i don't know as it turned around and looked at us a shivering sensation it seemed to look like it threw something but i coulden't make out what it was it seem to be getting closer and then i hear john yell duck its a syth i duck just in time and when i look behind me a tree was cut in half i look back and the dark figure was gone as we walk to a little town we see a boy being chased by a giant liger as he screams help do we help or do we ignore him you be the judge

Comments

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[xXHotPocketBrotherChildxX]

Where is your punctuatoin? Capslocks? Anything that will make your story divide correctly? Good writing needs this. Thats like, one of the first rules in writiing.