- It was growing darker and darker as I was racing to get to the bus stop on my way home from the downtown shoping center. All of a sudden I was sarounded . "were are you going little girl" one of the men asked me, I already knew it was the end when everything turned black. I woke up tied to a chair, I looked around, the ware house we were in was damp with boxes here and there. There was a boy around my age( 15 ) it seemed was tied to a poll, I looked closer ," no... What have they done to you" I sighed when I saw the beaten boy was my boyfriend Trent. I started to feel the pain of the scars I had also resived, but I knew the worst was yet to come. A door opened and Trent looked up. A man entered with a sharp blade, too big to be a knife, and walked over to me," looks like it's time for your boyfriend over there to talk, princess." he sneered. He put the knife to my chest and cut deeply in an outline of a heart, I screamed the pain was to much to handle but for trent sack I tried my best to swallow it ,"just to be clear if Trent here don't talk this will be the target!" he threated and looked at trent ," tell me were Mary kaitlyn is ,boy! NOW!" he ordered "she... She lives at walaby waker street house numbed 274..." he said in a frail voice. " good job boy but were still killing you friend here!" pointing at me as the man spoke, trent face grew pale as snow. "NO!" he shouted as the man drew in closer for the kill, I looked up, wondering why this was happening and say a figure ubove crashing thru the window. He landed straght in front of me " hop on." he ordered, and everything turned black once more.
- by Miami Suki |
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- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: Dragon Scar
- Artist: Miami Suki
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its not a full thing, it was way better in my dream but this is just a draft. i will promise to put up a complete story later!
also, is you could would you please post your ideas for the ending and what you think of it! and yes i know im a pretty bad speller... - Date: 06/22/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Miami Suki - 06/28/2009
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thank you!
it will be a will though cause my partner in this book i gone!
we will though work on it next week! - Report As Spam
- Princess of Darkness 365 - 06/28/2009
- this is very a very cool rough draft please put up the complete story!
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