- Matthew wake up!!!!!Man,well looks like its detention for me,again.But it was worth it.My dream,a man in a black coat was standing in front of me,i said who are you,he said Don't you remember me,I trained you.I...got fustrated and took full charge by the time I got to him,I was outcold on the ground,I couldn't tell if I was still in my dream.Next thing I know,a sword comes from nowhere and almost takes my head off,and then X (the black coat guy) came out of nowhere with a sword sheathed in his hands,he told me to pick up my sword,I don't know what this is about but i'm can't die here,so I picked up my sword and we began to fight.At the moment it seems like I was winning,but all he was trying to do was get me tired,and it worked to,by the time I fell to the ground,his sword was all in my face.I thought it was the end for me,but a big flash from out of nowhere coverd everything,I couldn't see but I heard a voice that said,remember.Matthew wake up!!!!!And thats the story so far.we'll see what the future holds.
- by nijiba koyotoya |
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- | Submitted on 06/23/2009 |
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- Title: do I excist?
- Artist: nijiba koyotoya
- Description: my memory part 3
- Date: 06/23/2009
- Tags: excist
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Comments (5 Comments)
- RainKissedChild - 12/04/2009
- I'm sorry, bu how did this make spotlight? I'm a hardworking, detailing writer and THIS is what ends up on spotlight?
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- iDootsie - 12/04/2009
- Unlike the folks below, I tell the truth brutally. It's s**t. The idea sounds alright but the format is so irritating!
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- ElectraShocked - 07/23/2009
- No...Spaces...After...Sentances.....ARGHH!!!
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- LexyCobriana - 06/29/2009
- You need to work on this... definately, but if you do, let me know, and I'll read it again.
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- Epic Kittehsaurus - 06/23/2009
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It is too hard to read. Go back and rewrite it a little bit.
You forgot a lot of quotation marks. - Report As Spam