- STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!! the stranger backed me up againist the wall He said queerly this is it your dead i screamed an ear piercing scream NO!!!!!!!.I felt a hand shake me and say Marissa?,you ok? i opened my eyes finally my vision came clear i said Serina? my Cousin hovered over me with a Goofy grin on her face she said Dude you were screaming in your sleep thats five times in a row this week I said Ri i'm still paranoid about what happened last week say if that stranger is still lerking around somewhere trying to Locate us she rolled her eyes and said oh come on Rissa this is stupid we're totally protected by my Dad and your Mom everything is ok she reached out and took my hand and said Trust me i promise and squeezed it now go back to sleep already! I shut off the light anf tucked myself back in and pondered for a minute and twidled my thumbs i thought Serina is right this is stupid i'm protected by Mom and Uncle Robert.Morning Mom! My Mom said Wow aren't you up and about this morning I took a piece of Toast from the plate and said with a mouthful Yeah i guess I swallowed down the rest of my toast and said i'm gonna take a walk around the Block She looked at me and said Honey i don't want you to go anywhere alone outside ask Serina to go with you i reached for another piece of toast and said well ok i trotted upstairs and opened my bedroom door and said Ri you wanna go with me to go for a walk around the block? she looked up from my Laptop and said Yeah let me tell my friend i got to go.I rolled my eyes and said thats all you ever do is go on the compter its sick! i mean i know i used to be Computerholic but i realized it isn't healthy for the Human body she looked at me like i was wearing an ugly outfit and had a bad hair and said Wow Rissa she shut the screen and got her sneakers on and said well lets get going i put my roller skates on she looked at me again with that same look and said Roller skates? i nodded and said incase i have to skate away from the stranger she rolled her eyes and opened my door and trotted downstairs she looked at my Mom and said bye aunt Lori bye Dad! they both waved i skated down the drive way and into the street she yelled out Wait i couldn't hear her because i was more than halfway down the street i zoomed past the old ghost house i rolled my eyes and thought why does everyone believe in ghosts spirits so retarted! i slowed down then looked back my cousin was nowhere in sight i started to sweat i could feel my face getting hot i skated down to the mini forest where my house was i pulled off my skates and walked into the forest i saw footsteps that seemed to struggle i yelled out as loud as i could SERINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I yelled again and again until my throat started hurting i wandered even farther into the forest All of a sudden i came to sounds that were screaming and yelling bad words finally a little shack came into view i thought thats where the sounds are coming from!!! i looked around until i spotted something to hit the stanger with i stared in disbelief i saw a metal bar i reached for it i thought Oooo pretty heavy! i tried to bend it and said oh good it dosen't break! i walked closer and closer to the shack finally i reconized the screams they were my cousins! and that talking voice was the strangers! on the side on the shack i saw some rope hanging on a nail i grabbed it quickly i pulled open the shack door i saw Serina struggling on the floor with a man as soon as she saw me she yelled out MARISSA GO GET HELP!!!! SAVE YOURSELF FIND MY DAD!! the stranger saw me and swooped towards me i dodged him and ran like i never did i didn't bother to pick up my roller skates i mean who would? i ran into my house and slammed the front door i screamed out UNCLE ROBERT COME HELP SERINAS IN TROUBLE THE STRANGER GOT HER HES IN A SMALL SHACK IN THE FOREST!!!! my uncle ran to me and said calm down i'll get my shotgun he ran in his bedroom and came out faster than a second we ran out the door and into the forest i got the metal bar and rope and followed my uncle when he saw serina and the stranger his face turned redder than ketchup i ran up to the stranger and wacked him behind the head my uncle backed him againist the wall with the shotgun pointing at his stomach i grabbed my cousins arm and threw the rope to my uncle i ran with my cousin to my house and locked the door i breathed hard and said loudly are you ok??? Serina put her hand on her chest and said yes i feel so weak i helped her upstairs and into my room i said sweetly Ri just rest i'll serve you like a maid she forced a smile i glanced at her face and said let me get you some water you look faint i ran downstairs and got a bottle of water from the refrigerator and ran back upstairs i gave her the bottle i thought for a second and said i'll be right back and ran downstairs again breathlessly and spirinted out the door i saw my uncle and the stanger wrestling in the middle of the street i got a hold of the metal bar and rope i hit the stranger as hard as i could and hog tied him as tight as a could i gave him another wack and helped my uncle up and said lets throw him in the forest Uncle Robert he nodded and put his arm arounded my shoulders THE END
- by Admiral Terminator |
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- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: Fast and furious Stranger!
- Artist: Admiral Terminator
- Description: I think you'll like htis story its very intresting
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: fast furious stanger
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Mishiro - 06/30/2009
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Holy wall of text, Batman!
Please space your paragraphs correctly. And use proper grammar. And proper spelling. neutral - Report As Spam
- may contain rum - 06/25/2009
- I think that, before i read this, u should spell some things a lil better and put quotation marks (these things right here~> " " wink around wat they say and separate the whole thing into paragraphs. (this includes separating everything they say.) I read 2 sentences and got confused.
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