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A dark figure walked towards the two terrified teens. The figure was holding a pistol. It's loaded. It was raining, and they were in the parking lot of an old, abandoned doughnut shop.
This is the story of a girl who went too far. She wanted revenge so bad, that she became a serial killer.
Alex McDonald was in her room. Her dark hair was in front of her pale face. She dressed in gothic clothes.
About right now, her mom is killing a five year old kid named Zachery. She turned in the music and turned the volume up so loud that she can't hear his blood-chircling screams. After a song, her mom went up to her room.
"Throw this out." She said. She was holding Zachery, who has no head. Alex could see the blood vessels squirting out blood in his neck. She threw the lifeless body on her cleaned carpet. She went downstairs to clean her carpet.
Alex grabbed a garbage bag and stuffed Zachery in it. The stench of death filled the room.
She went outside to her mom's car, a black SUV, and threw the bag in the trunk. She drove to the abandoned doughnut shop. The thing shut down when the public found out their secret ingredient was dead rats. She dug up a hole on the cement and dropped the bag inside. She then made a new layer of cement. She turned her back on the many dead bodies that lie inside the cement. She walked to the car that seemed to match the starry sky.
Someday, She thought, mom's gonna pay for this...
- by JONAS_Goth_123 |
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- | Submitted on 07/22/2009 |
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- Title: Murder Hill-Revengeful-one
- Artist: JONAS_Goth_123
- Description: This is the first chapter! Murder Hill is defenetly something you'd avoid.
- Date: 07/22/2009
- Tags: murder hillrevengefulone
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