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On a Sunday night BELLE asks her parents whether she can have a party!
Her mum and dad say yes as long as its only a small party five to ten people allowed.
Ok says Belle.
On Monday night Belle starts printing off letters for people as a invitation to her party.
She arrives all girls but five girls which are her best friends and the rest are just friends of hers.
On Tuesday morning, when Belle see's her friends and best friends, she hands her invitations out and they all say, I think I can come but I will just check with my parents first!
On Thursday after school they rang Belle and said they can come!
Belle was so happy that she was picking out her clothes for Saturday and telling her parents that they need to go grocery shopping to get chips, fizzy drinks and all the party food.
On Saturday the party started at 12:00pm and it finished at 5:00pm but between 12:00 and 5:00pm at 3:30pm these three girls named Lina. Indigo, Tam came and crashed the party.
"Why are you doing this? says Belle "Because we all hate you!" says Lina "This my party and now I would like you to leave!" says Belle
The three girls left and the party was crashed, Belle ran to her room humilated and embarrassed.
She didnt hang out with anybody at school, she just sat under the tree by herself.
It wasnt sorted out.
- by preciousbabyapple |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/13/2009 |
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- Title: DONT CRASH MY PARTY!!!
- Artist: preciousbabyapple
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Description:
THERE IS A GIRL NAMED BELLE WHO IS IN INTERMEDIATE!
SHE HAS A PARTY AT HER HOUSE AND THESE THREE GIRLS IN HER CLASS HATE HER SO THEY COME AND CRASH THE PARTY!!! - Date: 08/13/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Rockstar Crush - 07/27/2010
- May I ask was this a personal story or a story that has some fictional parts? If this was a personal story don't worry about being hated cause that is what makes you stronger person.
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- Rose of Hope - 09/21/2009
- You might want to add more description and depth to the plot. Y'know, make it a bit more interesting for the reader?
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- ElectraShocked - 08/14/2009
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Ummmm....I have a feeling this isn't fiction hon'...
I guess it could be better if you explain HOW they crashed the party.
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