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Katy's P.O.V.
In California, the wind blew slowly through the dark chilly night. I was looking for a place to stay as I was steering the wheel and eating fries. I drove until my eyes caught one out in the middle of nowhere. I leaned forward and read: Diamond Suite
I stopped the car, adoring the beautiful location. It was quite large and it was next to a clear blue lake. Behind it was a wide plain where you could have a picnic or just hang out. It was the perfect place to stay. It was rare to find a suite in such good condition.
I walked into the beautiful building, and walked up to the counter. I asked curiously...
"Do you have any non-smoking rooms left?"
The lady at the counter gave me a grin and answered.
"Of course we do honey. Here's your key."
I was surprised that such a suite in good condition would actually be available.
This is all I have right now and I got to get off sorry. Please tune in for the continue
- by l Forbidden l |
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- | Submitted on 08/15/2009 |
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- Title: Diamond Suite
- Artist: l Forbidden l
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Description:
This is a chapter about a form that I've been posting in. I couldn't finish it but I'll finish it later. Tune in please!
- Date: 08/15/2009
- Tags: diomand suite
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Comments (2 Comments)
- RipeRose - 08/29/2009
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You should try to keep going. if you don't have enough time or you wanna start a new story just let us know.
Btw 5/5 :3 ^^ - Report As Spam
- ElectraShocked - 08/17/2009
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hurry up and finish you sound, so far, like a good writer and I want to see what the plot of this story is smile . so far I'll give you a 5/5, but I'm not going to officially rate it untill you finish xD.
Good luck! Comment and Rate back?? - Report As Spam