- "Marigold, what'd you get for number 7?" gabreil asked her. Marigold paid him no mind, because she was too busy daydreaming. She gazed blankly at the dimension poles."Marigold!" Yelled gabreil. Marigold jumped, and turned around. " What?!" she snarled. "Pay attention. i could be out right now, not in your room helping you with your work." Gabreil shook his head. " sometimes i wonder what you think about." Marigold frowned. " i just think about what its like on the other side of the dimension poles, is all." she mumbled. Gabreil looked at her, shocked. " If one of the elders heard you saying something like that, you would be in deep trouble, you know that right?" Marigold glared. " They lie about the rules. Speak the truth? i think not. if we say something they dont want to hear, we're scolded." in the dimension community, there were many rules taken very seriously. one of them was not to lie to one another. Gabreil was speechless. " You know im right, gabreil." she put her hand onhis shoulder. He pulled away. " They wouldnt lie to us, its againts the dimension community's ru-" " They dont care, they can lie, because the elders are higher in authority." Gabreil closed his book and got up. " i have to go." he mumbled gravely, and walked away. Marigold watched him till she couldnt see him anymore. She smiled, and grabbed a sheet of paper out of her desk. in bold letters, it said " PLAN A". she silently sketched. 'this week, is the week i escape, and see the other side.' she thought.
- by Okashi the cat |
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- | Submitted on 09/21/2009 |
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- Title: Perfect world...?
- Artist: Okashi the cat
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Part 1
this has been in my head for so long. SO, ahem.
a community, supposedly "perfect", is kept in by what is called the dimension poles. nothing ages except for the people. there is no War, No music, No REAL emotions....
i have to cut it short today. - Date: 09/21/2009
- Tags: perfect world
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