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As the animals ran toward the plants, looking for a shade to stay with, thunderstorms roar across the sky. Lightning struck as a squirrel find its hiding place, under a dead log. Across the forest, a suburban is seen. Houses of similar sizes stood up, narrowing the road. Families gathered in the living room, celebrating gleefully.
In the middle of the world, there lies a silhouette of a person, a person with an unfortunate appearance. Everybody seemed to get rid of this person because of the ambiguous personality this person has. No one understands nor tries to understand. They even wanted to stay away from this person. The person, emaciated, stood up and stares at the dark moonlight sky, looking at the invisible stars, hoping for a miracle to occur. A cold breezy wind passed by as the trees swayed its leaves, dancing gracefully like they are accompanied with a pleasant music. Shivering, the person headed straight to the forest, looking for a shade to stay in.
As the person walked through the forest, a rustling of leaves is distinctly heard. Sudden rushed footsteps also starts to be heard. The sound kept getting louder as seconds passed by. Glancing sideways, finding where the sound may come from, the person became uneasy. Heart began thumping with a rapid speed. Hastily walking now, the person thinks for a way to arrive to the destination without undergoing harm. Head glanced sideways again, searching, but the sight seemed to blur. The forest is very dark. No lights are seen.
The end is near. Hope is no longer what to be felt. There is no hope. The person just stood up in the forest, thinking nothing, hoping nothing. Moments later, an enormous grizzly bear appeared. Already hungry, it jumped toward the person. Then there is silence. The sky went dim.
- by den_dandelion |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/17/2009 |
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- Title: The Person
- Artist: den_dandelion
- Description: This is my first somewhat story. I just began doing this hobby so please leave some comments or even constructive criticisms
- Date: 12/17/2009
- Tags: person unknown death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Crazy_Little_Red_Head102 - 12/20/2009
- I liked the personification in it. Also, the mystery of the story was intriguing. There were a few spelling errors, but you'll get better with that^^ It was a really good story.
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- pulchrare - 12/18/2009
- Its an interesting story. I'll admit, it needs a bit of tweaking, but very good for a first attempt. My advice is just keep at it, and soon you'll get the hang of it. Check out my werewolf stories, about a teen werewolf and her pack. They are caught(human, of course. No werewolf would be THAT careless) and sent to a boarding school where everyone lives in houses, not dorms, and live there until they are 18. An interesting situation, you see.....
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