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Part 1
A red hair, green eyed girl was walking home from the local store. She saw a little blue dot in the youngs woods that line the road. She follow it into the woods. Rose called out to it, "Wait up!" The blue dot stop on a branch for a short time. On the closer look at the blue dot she realize it is really a beautiful, blue fairy. When the blue fairy started flying deeper in the woods. The young woods that she knows forever started to change. It should have been famliar territory, but she found a sight she had never seen. A enormouse forest of old growth, lichen dripping from massive branchs of the old setinels of the forest. The rich smell of most earth felled her senses. The fairy flew passed some of the old trees that are bigger then most cars, and into a veautiful, old house. It looked like no one was home. To she went into the house, still following the blue fairy. In the house she saw the fairy in the main hall and she realized that she is in a other world.
Before her was the grandeur of the old house and behind her was the deep reache of the forest. Rose felt that she should be concered, but some reson she was oddly calm. The world she have known is gone, like the dust in the wind. Her old world mean nothing to her. She watch the fairy few minets as it enter slowly into a large chamber. As it fluttered, fairy's gassamer wings defying ravity with the whisper of power unfathomable to the human mind. She triled it curiously, while wondering who's old house, she have so carelessly wandered into.
The blue fairy stopped before a padded chair, like ones from an old liberey. It seened empty, but the gassamer, winged fairy spoke, "M'Lord Paras. I wish to talk to you. It seem I found the human as you requested of me." The fairy bowed, and floted otu of the room. The presence didn't show itself right away. She stayed were she was, because she didn't know what to do. Suddly there was a man by her side. He look like a man in his late 30's, but his eyes showed different. His eyes shown withe with the flows of the ages. His crown glistened with every gem that comes from the earth.
- Title: Hidden World part 1
- Artist: Rosegurl1
- Description: Hidden World is a working title, and I may change it. I wrote this some time ago. I want to know what you guys think of it. Sorry for some of my spelling. I hope you like it. This is all about a girl name Rose and what is happing to her.
- Date: 02/08/2010
- Tags: hidden world
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Comments (2 Comments)
- damagedalice - 02/15/2010
- pretty good, a few mispellings here and there but it sounds great so far.
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- Rosegurl1 - 02/09/2010
- Please comment on the story. I want to know what that needs to be fix.
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