- In 2000 a girl named Yuzuka Kirana have been kidnapped when she was 4 years old. No one knew where she was and have been looking all over for her. It was cold and the snow is falling early this year. Foot-step in the snow lead a track that was easy to follow but still.....no one could find the kidnapper, not even the cops. The sound of Yuzuka's cries filled the area and the smell of blood left behind was thought to be the blood of Yuzuka since there was a gun shot, then all was quiet. The trees casted shadows that looked like monsters, about to hunt you down and finish you off. A trial of people foot prints are long and wide. Looking and looking for Yuzuka...day and night but still.........no sign of her. Finally, they gave up and left....thinking Yuzuka, is dead.
- by _XxX_HELL PRINCESS_XxX_ |
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- | Submitted on 02/17/2010 |
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- Title: The Girl in the Shadow
- Artist: _XxX_HELL PRINCESS_XxX_
- Description: The Girl in the Shadow Prologue. Please Comment
- Date: 02/17/2010
- Tags: girl shadow
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- Aquelopatra - 02/17/2010
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OK! It was fairly good! Like the introduction. ^v^ Maybe it was the shortness that stunned me... >.< The sentences were kinda like flash quick scenes from a TV. smile It jumps rapidly after one scene to the next. Try to drag and connect them ^^
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