The Withered Rose Ch. 1

• Artist: Skaterboy696
• Description: A story about Love,Passion and A MURDER MOST FOWL
• Date: 06/28/2010
• Tags: withered rose

Christy was the newest girl in school,There was something about her,Ally knew it.Christys Dark Brown hair was always down and she NEVER smiled,She NEVER talked.Once Ally tried to talk to her but Christy just looked at her and Scowled and walked on.Ally is....well nice to her friends,was NEVER popular,just...you know in the middle.Her best friend was Justin,Who knew her ever since his Accident in Kindergarten.Ally helped him get to the bathroom before anyone would see.Today was Allys birthday,Which would become the scariest day in her LIFE!

Ch. 2:April 15th

Comments

[ladyjewell]

One of the more important things a writer should know is how to spell, or how to use a spell checker. =D Beyond that are pesky things like grammar and punctuation (school,There -> school. There and her,Ally ->her. Ally). And the proper use of capital letters (Christys Dark Brown hair -> Christy's dark brown hair).

[Skaterboy696]

srry i dont know how to spell smile

[prettybluedresses]

I thought this was going to be a story about a homicidal chicken because you spelled "foul" wrong in the title. "Fowl" is a bird raised for food purposes, like a chicken.